Wonderful! So romantic... :)

loved the way you write. thanks for sharing your talent with us.

"nobody panic"? It's the perfect time to panic! :D

I hope we find out at some point what magic logic was going on in the background, cause it sure sounds fascinating.

I loved this story.

Okay, first off, let me just apologize for not discovering this amazing piece of art until now. Labyrinth has been my all-time favorite movie ever since I can remember, and only just now did I find that there could be more to the story than Jim Henson intended. I have never, ever, been so moved by a story, let alone a fanfiction. I felt as if the entire time I was reading, I was holding my breath in anticipation. All of the characters were portrayed so well, and I was a bit wary of the epilogue because (as you said), the bittersweet ending was very tempting. However, upon reading it, I feel as if nothing better could have completed such a magnificent story. I can tell that though I've finished reading, this won't be the last time I do so. I cannot thank you enough!

I like both endings. I do have a bit of a thing for bittersweet in general, but life has been difficult and disheartening lately, so I appreciate the happier scene and possibilities of the epilogue at the moment. :)

This was a great reread! I really enjoyed it, and now I remember why it was on my favorites list.

After all that...and they still don't end up together. Star-crossed to the marrow of their bones (though I'm hoping we'll find out that's not true in the epilogue).

And it makes me incredibly sad that it was Sir D who said there's no such thing as happily ever after.

That's very sad and distressing. :(

Oh no...I hope Sir D is okay. :(

I love Jareth's transformation - it was the best! Very fairytale-esque.

While most of this story seems brand new after so much time, I definitely remembering reading that marking situation before. Kind of hard to forget. ;)

The being-lured-into-the-river thing reminds me of my favorite ghost story from when I was a kid: Wait Till Helen Comes. Still scary, actually.

Twice now the King of the Dead has told her "You promised." I don't remember her promising anything. Am I not remembering or is he just saying that, betting on the influence of false memories?

I love that Sir D was going to challenge Hoggle to a duel over Jareth, and I also love that while Jareth took off to rage pout, Rumor was looking out for Sarah.

Oh, goodness. Jealous much, Jareth?

Also, interesting that Jareth is afraid of change. It's a different take on his character I don't think I've seen before, or at least not seen emphasized.

Or not-so-hidden reference ;)

Lol - Sir D as a rogue! I would love to read that story.

What did she say?! That's so not fair...

Oh, no, what did she say?

Sarah the goat! I'm relieved she has not been forgotten, though her fate is still troublingly uncertain. :)

I love Sir D's hat and mittens! (I meant to say that last chapter but got distracted.)

And I loved the part with Jareth getting all quietly angry and stormy. That was nicely done.