|Reviews for Anger Management Is So Overated!|
| Ganheim chapter 4 . 5/6/2007
The first thing I want to point out is that all of your story is center-formatted, which drastically reduces any look of professionality. I'd fix that and it would look much better.
Kenneth Reimon, Vincent Krewsvier, Barbra Leidbalk and…
[The character’s name is “Barbara”, though her true name is Simone Liedbulk.]
But before Slayn could protest Buddy left the building.
[Missing comma following ‘protest’.]
Out of curiosity Slayn went outside to see what was wrong.
[Missing comma following ‘curiosity.]
Slayn just stared at his companion; Hugh was the only person he knew that could go from upset to calm in a matter of seconds.
[With the exception of himself…oh, wait, that’s flipping between Slayn and Gray.]
then suddenly he spotted Annette walking down the street.
[Wouldn’t he notice right from the start that Annette was wearing something different?]
He then quickly dodged Annette’s hand, which was trying to strike him.
[‘Annette’s swing’ would have worked better, and been much shorter.]
Hugh and Slayn they both corrected her.
[The ‘they’ is unnecessary.]
[An onomatopoeia is written without quotation marks, unless it’s a smartass literally saying the words.]
Both Slayn and Hugh were now covering large bumps on their heads.
[‘_holding_ large bumps’?]
Funny, though I’m not sure how many of the out-of-characterisms are intentional.
God bless and happy writing,
| Salacassera chapter 4 . 7/4/2006
It's been awhile since a fic has made me laugh out loud, but this one sure did. I love how you write Hugh and Slayn the most - it's funny how poor Slayn is the only "normal" one.
| Droiture LeReve chapter 4 . 1/17/2006
OMG I feel SO bad for poor Slaynie. A month and a half of crazy, sugarhigh, anger-issue having, stupid people. Oh my good golly gosh darn it, I feel yer pain, Slayn. Hey, that rhymed...hehehe...anyway, yes. Good golly gosh darn it, Slayn, my homeslices be nutsy too.
| DragonOTDarkFlame chapter 4 . 10/17/2005
VTM...You're nuts! OK? That is all there is to it! You are completely frickin' NUTS!
| Vin-the-Mazoku chapter 4 . 10/12/2005
Just wanted to say the storys still great and
| Vin-the-Mazoku chapter 3 . 10/1/2005
LOL great so far!
Keep it up!
| DragonOTDarkFlame chapter 3 . 9/21/2005
'o.o...what the f $# # $ #% #$$! $$ $ $ $%% ?
| Isofonia chapter 2 . 9/3/2005
This is hilarious! Please keep going! I havn't seen a fic this good in ages! I just played Growlanser and this was great! Please continue!
| DragonOTDarkFlame chapter 2 . 8/31/2005
Ho...ly...Crap! HA HA HA HA HA! OW! OW! OW! I Think my side just split. (Falls over laughing, hits head, bleeds profusely)
| DragonOTDarkFlame chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Oh God! HA HA HA! Funny as hell VTM! Fu..nny..As...Hell!
| GreatLight432 chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
Excellent! It's amusing to see the 'confessions' of the characters you fight alongside in GL3, but what's worse is that I can actually picture(and hear) them singing the song. *hangs head* I am a sad little human being.
Basically, I'm saying that you're still doing a good job. However, you DID misspell some of the names, so here's the correct spellings:
Anywho...I updated my story, so I expect a review from you shortly.;)
| GreatLight432 chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
...okay, you are REALLY starting to live up to your pen-name with this fic! I'm really curious to see where this goes now, and given the start, it's gonna be one hell of a laugh-riot.:D
Turnabout's fair play, so as long as you keep reviewing my fanfic, I think I can do the same for you. *wink* Whatdya say?
| LillianandJane chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
SO FUNNY! ...jello mold...*starts laughing uncontrolably* *falls off her chair laughing* continue please! cya later!