Reviews for Lesley and Dracula
psycogirl234 chapter 2 . 9/1/2005
nice... I was wondering how to post storys. Good story

keep it up and update soon
Shero chapter 2 . 8/30/2005

Kirstin Daae chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
hey, i like it. just one thing... when you had Lelsey say "If you want to know the truth, I thought of Dracula as a monster." you forgot the never so then it would make more sense so then it would be "If you want to know the truth, I never thought of Dracula as a monster." just letting you know other than that, it was great cant wait for the next one!

~Kirstin Daae~
FFAMasquerade2005 chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
hmm, i want to read more, please hurry up:)
Fortune Zyne chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
Not too bad, but you need to work on beefing it up a little, its too...bland and rushed. Try giving more detail and DO NOT RUSH! That is the worst thing you can do with a fanfic.
Princess Airiana chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
Oh no! He's going to bite her! Is she going to get away! Please update soon! This is really exciting!
Lily Black chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
That got me interested in the story. Please update soon. It sounds real good!
Princess Airiana chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Short but cool. Lelsey is in for a big surprise. Is it gonna be one of those stories where Dracula keeps a girl prisoner and eventually she falls in love with him? I just have to know! You better update soon!
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