Reviews for Something Isn't Right There
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
A great story. Very good.
fisharecoolies chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
haha, thats great! very funny and very origional. great job!
sodoto chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Firstly, the concept. I love the concept. Oh, boy, do I ever. Secondly, very multi-layered, thick with references (the Anthony Head-Maxwell House coffee reference is suave)- so much depth and thought put into each sentence. I like your style of prose, it's detailed and varied, your command of language is - as ever - impeccable and used to great result. Some people can't do prose, and make it bland - yours is interesting and compelling. The interraction between brother and sister is clearly based on experience, which is grand and lends a coherency and realism to the beginning. You lace it with humour, and begin it so, which is a wonderful start and I hope to see some more soon - rest assured I will not be allowing you to Rest In Peace when it comes to furthering this fanfiction!