|Reviews for A Journal by Thomas Ordainas|
| Jackie A. Mendez chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Great, another Fem!Revan story. I don't understand why girls just won't keep his gender right. Is playing a game all people really know of Revan? Does the male/female option in there give them an excuse to give him a sex change? In canon, he's a human male with black hair. How come he's always made female (by mostly the girl writers) in a lot of these stories? I'm not trying to bag on you or anything, I honestly just don't understand why.
Lot's of page breaks in this chapter.
| machievelli chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
To be posted 29 October 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.
Post KOTOR: An ancient journal records snippets from Revan and other people as it changes hands.
The piece is interesting in that we see each event from outside. Her brother, Malak, Bastila, even a couple of masters are recorded, all for the enjoyment of a very young girl.
| shellythenerd chapter 2 . 9/5/2005
Wow, I really like this story. Great Job. D