Reviews for Not All Pretend
NarucchiiBoo19 chapter 21 . 6/10/2016
i love this fanfiction happy ending
rutzky chapter 21 . 5/27/2014
I like your story. Thanks for writing stories like this. It's not too late to be an asukaga fan. Harhar.
xx2991xx chapter 21 . 11/7/2013
Another great story, gosh, I really love it when author finishes their story )
ShinRaZAFT chapter 21 . 5/12/2013
Just read your story and liked it until...I reached chapter thirteen.

However I'm still happy that you are still one of that very, very tiny group making Patrick Zala the loving and caring father. But the whole event on chapter thirteen was taking it to far of people making Athrun always taking all the blame.

However, Cagalli was also at fault and started it by tell him to leave, but as always she gets away with it. She gets no punishment at all when her fault. Cagalli can do no wrong and it's always Athrun's fault. That's getting annoying!

Next time I hope you at least make Athrun and Cagalli SHARE THE BLAME! If you can make Patrick the good father, you at least can make that.
laneige-girl chapter 21 . 9/1/2012
love this fic so much! it tops in my fave list )
Fate Camiswhil chapter 21 . 7/15/2011

this is definitely one of the very best!


FushionAC chapter 11 . 4/11/2011
the song lyrics were simple word but it could stab the heart...

I cry along the end of this chapter...
Miyu Nanami chapter 21 . 12/23/2010

Love the asucaga pairing:)
TheOnesOnTheHand chapter 14 . 6/27/2010
ok, i just read 13 chaptres of ur story in 2 days, and i plan to read more. i think ur doing a really good job at your story, it was recommended to me by my best friend and she is very picky, so congrats on getting her to like ur story. also,

to answer ur question, im from CANADA! not to be mean or anything, but i didnt really like the fact cagalli was pregnant, but i like all the drama it brought for the gorgeous couple. just to point out u had a few grammar and spelling errors, if you still need that editor, id be happy to help!
Latiwings chapter 21 . 3/23/2010
It's a really wonderful story!
narutoking chapter 12 . 6/29/2009
lol i read chapter 1 at late 2007 and i said it sucked (no offense) then today my friend said read it again and i don't know how i ever said that your fic is great and if the first comment offended u i am sorry i love this fic soo much now i think i may read it twice

anyway im gonna read more of your work(possible all)

FanFicLuver chapter 21 . 6/23/2009
I loved this fan fic! Really edgy and real and it touched subjects that other people tend to avoid when writing fan fics. Great job!
you should get lost chapter 4 . 5/20/2009
O.o A-Athrun and C-cagalli... made... love...? OHOMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH! *blushes furiously* THEY FALL FOR EACH OTHER IN THE DARK!

you should get lost chapter 3 . 5/20/2009
badump... badump... badump...

This is so exciting! XD

you should get lost chapter 2 . 5/20/2009
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