Reviews for Ashley Plays The Game
Fidelitas chapter 9 . 3/26/2006
What a chapter it was!I liked it a lot!I could imagine the scenes,great work!

It seems like the tension is growing up between them...

Poor John,if he only knew who Ashley was fantasizing about in the car :( and Steph...

I don't know...but i feel at the end of this game both of them will be winners ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter...it's hot in here or it's just your story ;)

update soon,please :)
Berry-Bubbler chapter 9 . 3/18/2006
plz plz plz update! this story rules! xx:D
NSB chapter 9 . 3/14/2006
UPDATE WOMAN GODDAMN IM ON THE EDGE OF MY DAMN BED!

GOD THAT WAS HOT!
Sephora chapter 9 . 3/14/2006
G-R-E-A-T!... I WANNA PLAY THE GAME TOO *pout* hahaha.. LOL.. -*sephora*
Undertaker's HellRider chapter 9 . 3/13/2006
Your story seriously keeps getting better, theres so many ways you could take it. Your an amazing writer! I'm dying to read the next chapter! So hurry! XD.
ShadowVixen chapter 9 . 3/13/2006
Wow, as always, HOT! I want Ashley to win the game! She has too! But poor John and Stephanie. Unless they're doing the same thing! Oh, my head hurts from thinking about it so much! lol. Awesome job :)
sarahblue23 chapter 8 . 3/12/2006
Bah! You left me hanging! I am really excited about the next chapters. I really appreciate you taking the time to check your spelling and grammar; it makes the story much easier to read.

I am anxiously awaiting the next chapters.

(o:

Sarah
NSB chapter 8 . 3/11/2006
UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE PLEASE!
VolcomStoneBabe chapter 8 . 3/11/2006
omg.i love both this chapter and the last. awesome. can hardly wait for the next.
foogie chapter 8 . 3/11/2006
I really liked this chapter they always get so close, but never actually get there. please update soon!
Kissybabe84 chapter 8 . 3/10/2006
Nice update 2 chapters in one day. I have to say the ice cream thing was my fave part just imagne the look of Trips face.

update soon.
Fidelitas chapter 8 . 3/10/2006
I'm just loving reading this story,you know!You are doing a very good job with it...3 great chapters they were ;)

I like a lot the way them both trie to score and win this game...it is becoming something more...Hunter is jealous,I bet and Ashley can't stop thinking about him,even in John's arms...

The whole ice-cream thing was funny...i think Hunter definitely cooled off :D

And the hot scenes are well written...

Update soon,please :)

the next move is Hunter's...I can't wait...
Sephora chapter 8 . 3/10/2006
YUMMY! haha I love your story. Its original compared to the others i've read. you are a GENIUS! *sephora*
Undertaker's HellRider chapter 8 . 3/9/2006
Amazing chapters! The story keeps getting more interesting! I can barely contain my wonder of how it's going to go! Keep writing! _.
ShadowVixen chapter 8 . 3/9/2006
Wow! Both chapters were HOT! You're killing me here! lol. I really liked them both. I know this would be weird, but what if someone like Snitsky or something started messing with Ashley and H actually helped her out? Teehee, I know what you mean about wanting to be Ashley in this fic. *Sigh* But what can you do? lol. I'll be waiting for more :)
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