Reviews for Old friendships, new loves |
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![]() ![]() ![]() HEY FANS OF THIS FIC, I CONTINUED THIS ON MY NEW ACCOUNT- CHECK OUT "Old friendships, new loves continuation" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Update soon? Please? 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you'd finish this story but something tells me you won't Probably because it's been five years since your last update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so cute _ i love your little conversations with the charachters beacuse all fanfic authors are evil and unstoppable. they should learn that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, the KrayonxErutis is so cute here- and Erutis will fall one day! Mwahaha! Achem. Love the couple! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, nice job Raenef! Great chapter! Hehe, anyway, loved Eclipse's reaction. I won't eat anything with sugar in it- haha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Erutis, don't kill the author- I want to read more! Achem, anyway, this was a great chapter. "you, me, this awfully comfy bed...well I think that you get the picture" Ahh that was so funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, this sounds like it's going to get really really good now- I wonder what Krayon will do? Love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is really funny- that is so how he would get Chris to leave- and Chris would so fall for it. And the scripts between you and the characters are random but very funny too! Applesauce... - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe! Yes, I ove that rule- I should use it on my sister! She'd never get any peace... - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yey, loved this chapter- too funny and cute! That's what I love about this pair! Great job! And I have a feeling Eclipse is going to get a really big headache again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great hapter, so sweet the loyalty and trust between those two- and I'm crossing my fingers hoping for an ErutisxKrayon. - |
![]() ![]() Hmm. It's a bit sketchy, you jump around quite a bit. Also, you take too much time chatting with the characters about the story than you actually do on your chapters. It's annoying. Work on the story, not trying to be funny in your author's notes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe...I love Krayon, he's just so...he's KRAYON! Awesome fic, I'm driving myself insane wanting more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! It was so cute! Please update son! |