oh no please let manuel be alright please -prays-

ahhhhh

i hope everything gets better within the next instalment:)

Wow, was not expecting that ending, though I thought something was wrong. Poor Harry! This was another enjoyable installment in the series, so thanks for writing. I like how you handled some of the cannon events. It was really in character how many that took up a lot of time in the books were kept in the background here since Harry and Blaise really don't care about anything outside of their own lives.

Thanks again for writing!

Wow, that is epic. Can't wait to see what happens!

As of today, you are officially my favourite author. I read, and read, and read, and I couldn't stop until I finished. (That is including the sequel) But WOW, it was so amazing! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

(1:34 am) The opening A/N's to chapter 2 just pissed me off so much I'm going to bed now, and MAYBE I'll try reading more tomorrow!

The description of 'Malal', the who, what, and why he is in the story... IS SUPPOSED TO BE IN THE 'STORY', not the G.D. Freakin' notes. There aren't supposed to BE NOTES! Ones that say, "sorry, I was sick, That's why I didn't update last week," are O.K. ... Plot, story lines, and character introductions ARE SUPPOSED TO BE IN THE BODY OF THE STORY!

The only reason I will try again tomorrow is that I already read the first two fics of this 'series', and you didn't DO this in those... or maybe I didn't read them.

It's extreme, I know, but can't you just imagine cruising through L.o. , and there's a note on the page, saying 'Oh yeah, the thing that just drug Gandalf down to his death was a Balrog, a 20 foot tall fire demon with a whip of fire. I would have put it in the story, but I FORGOT!"

I love how you twisted the plot and still managed to get everything in tact. Not many could actually pull off that trick. Great job and now, I'm off to your next fic!

~MysticBlood

What a cliffhanger for no sequal. Curse your eyes for writing so well and then ending there :P

Oh god, I can see Harry shooting Sirius before SB has a chance to explain himself.

WHY THE FUCK DID YOU KILL OF ARTHUR HE WAS COOL WHY NOT HIS STUPID COW OF A WIFE WHY ARTHUR

"Dad."

Wow, what a strong ending. You had already hinted at it, and I simply love the reaction you describe, it is very real. A great story, I had to laugh quite a few times in between, and it is a pleasure to read it.

I am just a bit astonished that Harry had no problems with killing Peter - because with his last kílls, he had some reaction after killing, while in this case he did apparently not. I mean that well, technically, he was just killing a mouse, but still...

It is nice to have a some mayor differences this year, but I am not sure on how to prove Sirius' innocence without the body of Peter - it might have been useful.

The interactions between your mayor characters are lovely written, i especially like the kids together with their guards, and their fathers, even if I think you cut remus time short. If you're up to it, maybe you could write another scene with Remus tutoring them for the patroni?

A great work and I am looking forward to read more about Harry and Blaise!

oh shit major cliffy

again! again! an AWESOME fic! XD

but, poor harry, manuel is in coma, but at least he didn't die... :p

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