with arthur dead, how are you goingto go through with certain occurences in later books? namely Order of the Pheonix? Ah well, great job!

- No killing the author, at least it wasn't a beloved character. Though the angst now is going to be a tad bit more ah there. The things happening in your version are very different from the book, very exciting and much more humorous as well. Curiosity abounds though, how is Sirius going to be introduced let alone tell his story? The way things are it seems as if Harry would kill him on sight or something if he thought his godfather was gonna murder him. There are also confrontations with Snape to worry about seeing as Harry is a Slytherin to the core and wouldn't appreciate what Padfoot did to his head of house. But then why am I all that worried over it? It obviously won't happen for awhile.

Update when ya can.

great chapter

dont really care abotu killing arthur, he was nothing but a minor character but like u said at least u didn’t kill off Manuel, Blaise, or Trevor. that would have been terrible though i do feel sorry for they weasley kids especially the twins and bill. i think bill will feel the worst because he neva told his dad wat his real job is. i mean come on b4 some1 important to u dies u want to tell them eveythin and bill didnt get the chance.

great story again. kill petergwew(sp?)

i'm ur first review...i feel special