Reviews for The good and the bad
Veuve Noir chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
it's very good
nanamisakurachan chapter 3 . 8/10/2009
hehe update sooN! :)
Mr and Mrs Smith chapter 3 . 11/21/2006
Hello! would you like to share your fics in a livejournal community I set up for Mr. and Mrs Smith fanfiction? Id love to have your fics there as well! :D

If youre interested email me.
Lady Razeli chapter 3 . 10/14/2006
I love your story please write more. I'm anxious to see what will happen next.
Brangelina group chapter 3 . 10/14/2006
Hello. If youre interested in sharing Brad and Angelina fanfiction our email is

We have a group of writers and readers regarding Brad and Angelina Jolie relationship.
shortbutsweetmont4 chapter 3 . 9/14/2006
love this! keep going!
Sadistic Shadow chapter 3 . 1/4/2006
... So are there two Jasmines? Or are they the same one?

This is your first fic? I'm pretty impressed. I'll be honest and admit that it's definitely not the best as far as the over all mechanics (but don't mind me, I'm usually a nazi when it comes to that kind of stuff) but I do like the characterization. Some lines seem a little stiffly delivered, but I suppose that can't be helped.

Good job, looking forward to the next chapter.
Sadistic Shadow chapter 2 . 1/4/2006
John's such a dork. And Jane is just... Well, Jane.
Sadistic Shadow chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Haha, they would argue over its gender.
ElvenCompanion chapter 3 . 1/3/2006
CUte, I thought I had reviewed this already. I found it a few days ago and liked it, hope to read more. So update soon.
b2n4 chapter 3 . 12/13/2005
nice story
AbiSnocom chapter 2 . 12/10/2005
P.S. This is a really good story also because you made the characters how they act in the movie really well...not a lot of fancfiction authors can do that very good..Keep up the good work and please make the chapters longer..

;)
AbiSnocom chapter 3 . 12/10/2005
Um...are you going to continue cause I really like this story...but could you please make the chapters longer? thanks!

;)
sesshoumaru-tolkijin chapter 3 . 12/5/2005
really good...can't wait to read more
Elfvamp1-13-97 chapter 3 . 10/24/2005
update soon this is the only one with her haveing a baby. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for one.
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