Reviews for A grand adventure into Spira
Anasazi Darkmoon chapter 4 . 9/26/2006
Nicely done, although you need to capitalize your titles and make separate paragraphs for each person's part of the conversation.

Example:

"Did you find the gold chocobo?" Wakka asked.

"No, but I won't give up hope!" Yuna replied.

Otherwise, it becomes confusing for the reader. Other than that, though, I really do like this. If this is heading where I think it is, this will be the first Lulu/OC story I've seen. Good job!
Anasazi Darkmoon chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
Hmm...well, it could use a little work, but it seems like a good beginning. I'll be keeping an eye on it, so update whenever you have the time.