|Reviews for Words of the Heart|
| ahbuggrit chapter 6 . 6/29/2011
I like the fact that Anzu liked Seto, and that he rejected her, yet he still wants a relationship. It's an interesting complex situation.
What I also like is the fact that Naomi is not a horrible person - she's kind, and somewhat helpful to Kaiba :)
I hope that you will continue this story, and update soon.
| browneyes730 chapter 6 . 7/6/2010
Please update whenever you have the time and/or inspiration. You were doing good so far and I do want to know what happens next. ;)
| ginny7777 chapter 6 . 9/12/2009
gosh, he really is an idiot, huh?
| sweet.red.berries chapter 6 . 5/19/2009
I love this story!
Are you going to finish it? You're probably busy, but I would love to find out what happens.
| LadyTaz111892 chapter 6 . 12/17/2008
I loved how this story is so far!
Hope you update very soon!
| rally987 chapter 6 . 9/19/2007
I really love it! I wish you'd finish it, though! Just so you know, I have two tests tomorrow and I just spent the last 2 hours reading your stories. Thanks for the laughs! I needed them.
| Cerberuswolf chapter 6 . 9/14/2007
Whoo! So suspenceful! I likeie! . I'd love to see you put up new chapters, but don't rush yourself... I do know how it feels to be rushed... -.- Just keep up the good work!
| Crystalline Embers chapter 6 . 8/2/2007
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! It was really well written. Aw, I hope you update soon because, I have to know what happens next! It's killing me just waiting here! Please update soon! ASAP!
| xxx chapter 6 . 7/30/2007
Wow, this has been a really good story so far! I hope you'll continue updating - and soon too! Don't keep us poor readers waiting. ;]
Anyways, the words and sentences flow together really well. Good first chapter, by the way. :) However, some parts of the story do seem to go a little "too fast," and once in awhile it's hard to believe that Anzu would actually be able to forgive Seto (esp. for marrying).. Maybe you should add a "subtitle" kind of thing to places where there's a time gap of like... a few months? just so that it's more clear. Overall though, this has been a very enjoyable and suspenseful story - YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON! :]
| Angel chapter 6 . 7/23/2007
Update soon! Update soon!
| Suzie Queue chapter 6 . 7/23/2007
More intrigue! Naomi's mother...I already said I was interested in her, didn't I? And this bit with her and Mokuba I liked as well. He grew up, but I like it. His excessively chattery roles are slightly annoying.
Nice flashback again. Well chosen scenes (this one in particular, after Mokuba's comment from earlier).
Hope to see more soon.
| Suzie Queue chapter 5 . 7/23/2007
Oh, thank you God-thank you Mintt! A well done flashback! As much as I may dearly love the plots or even the content, it is just a pet peeve of mine to see "flashback" and "end flashback" in the middle of a story. And this was integrated very well. So THANK YOU!
Ahem. So. I like what I've seen of Naomi so far. I'm glad that she is not a bimbo or a money-loving snit. I'm glad to get her perspective on things.
I'm assuming, too, that we're not done with Mai and Jou. Looking forward to seeing more of them!
| Suzie Queue chapter 4 . 7/23/2007
E! Wow, that was a twist!
I like seeing different takes on the relationship between the Kaiba brothers. This was a good one, I thought. The Mokuba-as-matchmaker has always kind of annoyed me, but this has been handled well. I wonder about his wisdom in conversation with Anzu, but again, five years. If you keep it consistent, I think it's perfectly acceptable.
*I'm* really anxious to hear about this wife bit! That's a page-turner...or whatever the Internet-equivalent of that would be.
| Suzie Queue chapter 3 . 7/23/2007
I guess character-torture overall just kind of makes me wince...
The fighting again-this probably isn't very helpful, I'm sorry...I can't quite put my finger on what I feel is off about it. Last time I think I felt it was how far Seto was willing to let it go on, how much he let Anzu yell at much before his pride made him head out. Maybe this time it's the dialogue? Not all of it, just some things I suppose that feel forced to me.
Wise Sage figure (i.e. Uncle Spenser)-maybe watch out for him. Not that that's a BAD thing. Anzu needs someone like him. But I think he ought to be someone besides just the Wise Sage with all the answers.
Otherwise...another great chapter. Aw, why can't we all just get along?
| Suzie Queue chapter 2 . 7/23/2007
Yikes. Very angry chapter! I do like the dynamic of this altered but still adversarial relationship. I question *some* of the characterization-but it's very early in the story so I'm holding that card for now.