|Reviews for Learning to Breathe|
| faltrock chapter 21 . 3/5
A wonderful story! I laughed, I buried my face in trepidation, I had the warm fuzzy feels in me buzz comfortably.
If the epilogue is almost done, will you please finish it? Rounding this story off would make it even better.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/1
Just read this story. It is fantastic. Your characters are wonderful. I love this story! Especially Ginny.
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/22
Really enjoyed your story. AND yes, after so many, many years I'm still reading Harry Potter Fan Fiction. It's now been almost 4 years since you last posted and I just wanted to let you know that I hope you are still writing somewhere. You have a great imagination and writing talent. If you happen to have a itch, would love the epilogue to finish this. I'm a sucker for a powerful Harry.
| Thor chapter 14 . 2/21
Brilliant! :D I've been chuckling my way through the chapters and look forward to more.
| MyVeryWildImagination chapter 21 . 2/21
Gosh, this is one of the most touching and wonderful stories I've ever read.
I love it. Lovelovelovelovelovelove *blabbers on*
You are a amazing author.
You have just made me ship Hinny more than I already ship it, thanks alot! xD And oh my gosh, thanks again for writing the most exhilarating Harry Potter story that blew me away and reduced me to tears.
| william488 chapter 21 . 2/19
Good story. I really enjoyed it.
| Aurora BoreAlice chapter 21 . 2/11
….-continues to sit staring at the screen for a few more minutes-
WELL. I'll just fav and follow this, then head on over to see the rest of your brilliant work, thank you very much.
| Rebelipuff chapter 21 . 1/17
Hi Ben! I found your story by following the rabbit hole of recommended fics on the 'site, and I'm really, really glad I did. This was an amazing story, you (and the author who had the original plot bunny) did an amazing job of creating your own from an existing character. Thanks for going through the effort of writing this.
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/16
I've really enjoyed this story, but will you ever actually finish? It's been roughly 3 years and 7 months since you've updated! Please at least mark this story as abandoned if that is what happened and if not please update soon so that the journey can continue!
| bkasavan chapter 21 . 1/16
This was an interesting story.
Is it finished? If not, please update!
| Joshua Ruehadan chapter 21 . 1/3
Hey i started reading this story when Harry has just finished rescuing Ginny the first time... err the second, anyway just wanted to say its been a wild ride, great job!
| Glowfish36 chapter 21 . 1/2
Finally finished this incredible tale and I absolutely loved it. Yes, the story, characters, and grammar weren't perfect, but it was gripping, creative, and I couldn't put this, metaphorical, book down. Now, I only wish the last two chapters would get posted... even if the story says it's complete already. Congratulations on an amazing story, hope you have the time to pass by and publish the last two chapters :D.
| Biblio388 chapter 16 . 12/21/2013
Picking up the pace in a few different ways. Good chapter.
| Biblio388 chapter 14 . 12/21/2013
That was hilarious. It is funny to see the fish out of water effect. Great chapter with a good look into the thoughts of the characters.
| Biblio388 chapter 13 . 12/21/2013
Good stuff. That was worth any wait that took place to read it.