Reviews for Bad Hair Day
MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow chapter 13 . 6/21/2013
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OpaqueWhiteShadow chapter 14 . 11/15/2006
What happens to her?

Good story.I hope you update make the chapters longer.

Read-on
SammiSeldowitz chapter 14 . 7/5/2006
Great story! I can't wait for chapter 15, I'm really curious what happened to Sabrina. (Although I think I already know..)

You know, this would make for a great episode...

Great job, hope to see chapter 15 soon :)

~Sam
abandoned kitty chapter 14 . 5/7/2006
no offence your story rox but your chappies are way to short
Vinny yogi chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
sup!...::...

bye
Stace Loves Daniel chapter 11 . 1/14/2006
Hi all Stace here I'm working on Chapter 12 at the moment and hope to have it up shortly.

Feel free to email me on my yahoo address is at any time because I check my email every day so you get a reponse asap.

Later days,

Stace
Roxy Gang 2006 chapter 11 . 1/10/2006
liked the bad hair day it was funny Helda and Zelda had Sbarina's bad hair day she had to go to the other remales doctor to have a test done on her she wasn't allow to ues her magic
DreamForever03 chapter 11 . 1/8/2006
poor Harvey, great update!
DreamForever03 chapter 10 . 12/27/2005
I liked it, very original!keep updating and dont get discouraged!
nubbin27 chapter 9 . 10/30/2005
hi good story. well i cant think of anything funny to say... bye

xxSaraxx
Stace Loves Daniel chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Well Seething-Z I have no idea, I only heard from him through the review and besides its an anonymous can't be tracked.
Cerulean Whirlwind chapter 9 . 9/26/2005
That could be a reason...well, you have a pretty good grammar and control over your puncutations. However, all I'm seeing choppy sentences, dialogue and very little action AKA lemon-titis.

I suggest you really make your chapters longer, and try to make your sentences longer as well, ok? So people will feel more complied to review.

BTW, do you know who this "Grim" fellow is?
Stace Loves Daniel chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Yes Seething-Z English is my frist language sadly I have a disability its call bad education.
Cerulean Whirlwind chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
*blinks* You're twenty? Is English your first language?
Pink Robinia chapter 8 . 9/21/2005
This actually feels like I am watching the show. You really have gotten your characters down and especially Sabrina. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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