|Reviews for Worlds2007|
| Housefrau90 chapter 28 . 10/24/2014
Adorable. Spelling and grammar aside, this was such a joy to read! Thank you for writing this!
| Tara chapter 5 . 7/12/2010
From what I have read so far, I like the story linge and your style isn't so bad either. The only big thing is grammar, punctuation, and you get too wordy. I saw it was particularly bad in this chapter, especially so when you are describing something(i.e. the plane/private jet). A good way to solve this is to read the story backwards sentence by sentence.
EX: The dog ran. The cat is loud. The wolf howls.
You would read it: The wolf howls. The cat is loud. The dog ran.
This way, you can tell if each sentence makes sense by itself.
Keep up the good work and deal with the kinks.
And yes, I am a sad person who only reads and has no writing talent whatsoever.
| blackwolborg1996 chapter 6 . 11/30/2009
hay nice chapter i like how you've made tala and bryan a couple because there my fave characters. nice style too on how talas dressed. LOL. tyson sounds funny too and ian is a little too annoying but gotta love the blitzkrieg boys.
| xxasianicexx chapter 28 . 5/20/2009
LOVE IT! cute description of the baby!
| WolfSong chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Not gunna read it, just cuss its not my thing, but i wanted to tell ya I LOVED YOUR :P
| Angel-Jin chapter 28 . 3/7/2009
Love it. You are on my favs list.
| Kisa Meira chapter 28 . 10/14/2008
yay i have now read this twice and you should make a sequel or at least another story like it plz i like KaixRei(Ray) plz
| hellzboy chapter 28 . 9/16/2008
That was so sweet! XD but why resign?... I mean... let them resign when they finish college or something!... oh well.. that's just my opinion... hehehe cute name too~! hehe I really liked this story and yey sequal! XD
| LoyalAngel chapter 28 . 4/19/2008
awesome story lol... it took me 2 whole days to read but it was worth it -
i love the mushy parts and the lemons the most lol!
really cool story!
| Nejisangel69 chapter 28 . 5/7/2007
yey! i love it! i'm am now going to go read the sequal! thank you!
| Swallows a lot chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
hey this is a oretty good story actually kind of awesome story.
| Yuki chapter 5 . 11/15/2006
I am currently reading the full version of this,and it is awsome,but at the same time Rai asked Max if chocolate chip pancakes were okay I was eating .by the way great up the writing.;3meow
| TalaKaiReiLover chapter 12 . 9/10/2006
Love u tryto make a sequal a Tala Rei one-shot .
| otaku3kagome chapter 28 . 8/30/2006
I love it.
| Shinari-chan chapter 28 . 8/18/2006
Great story can't wait for the sequal