|Reviews for Lead me not into temptation|
| MsHope chapter 17 . 10/12/2015
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/21/2015
Wonderful much better than some MMAD out there.
| CoraismyHomie chapter 17 . 8/14/2015
| Minnie chapter 16 . 7/14/2014
Even now he protected her."
"Albus, please; it's enough. No more, Albus. No more."
"You've always valued life, Albus. Don't take anymore."
"Just aim for the heart, Harry; I promise it's still there."
DEM LINES MAKE ME FEEL
| Kate chapter 5 . 7/12/2014
Lines I love:
After all, when Severus first began to teach, she couldn't stand the sight of him. Now, it only made her cringe.
If this is your idea of peace, Albus, then I say give me war.
HOW SASSY! :) you are a genius
| Bang chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
This is perf! 3
| Lady McGonagallRichards chapter 17 . 4/6/2013
I loved your story idea and well found. Albus is a mix of white (love) and a black albus (loss) saved by the same person who hold the key to their heart.
| katia ravenchil chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Like it so far hope we see more of the gang.
| JustFishy chapter 11 . 2/11/2012
Exhaling the breath she didn't realize she was holding, Minerva loosened the grip on her wand slightly, smiling all the while. She should have known it couldn't be true. From personal experience, she knew he would, by all rights, outlive cockroaches.
Absolutely brilliant - that's my Alastor! *grins*
| Lady Raritatum chapter 17 . 1/9/2012
Whoa. Just...wow. Awesome story, but goodness that took a lot of concentration to read! Deep...very deep. I don't even know what to say, but dang, that was good! I mean, it's 2:30 in the morning and I'm ridiculously tired but still I couldn't stop reading in the middle of the story! Favoriting...that was awesome :)
| JasmineT chapter 17 . 11/24/2011
This fic was sooooooo awesome! It's so hard to find quality admm fics but this was by far one of the best ones I've read:) I'm also in love with the fact that u had Severus and hermione as a pair in it too :) thank u so much for writing this :)
| ScarletLioness chapter 17 . 8/17/2011
Wow, I stumbled upon this and read it right through.
It's like a rolercoster and so full of emotions...
The ending was so perfect, very well written and it made me cry a little.
Well, anyways, just wanted to tell you I loved this :)
| 0324236 chapter 17 . 5/21/2011
I totally fell in love.. with both Albuses and Minerva of course ;)
The last part was so amazing. I love how the real Albus found out that he had become Minerva's worst nightmare, that moment I had to reread a few times. I like how you used the Boggart to show what they feared most.
I don't know how you managed to achieve this but this whole story, every minute detail and every person's feelings make so much sense. There are so many parts of the story where I just wanted to grab some tissue and cry. It's so sad that the alternate Albus was starting to realize love... I mean if he hadn't I wouldn't have pitied him, but he had, so now I'm all freakishly emotional ready to fall into a fit of uncontrollable sobs.
I love your story so so much. Thank you for writing this:)
| Tides of Gray chapter 17 . 8/6/2010
Utterly enchanting and amazing. You put so much thought into this. I'm reading ths at 11.30 and I don't want to go to bed - this is spellbinding. I LOVED it - esp the angst - oh the angst! Beautiful work!
| izzybizzy333 chapter 17 . 7/13/2010
Though this story was sad I am infinitely glad I read it. This story, and the rest of your stories are awe-inspiring.