|Reviews for Alec finds out about heat|
| frannie chapter 2 . 9/5/2008
I love the last line.
| jfg207 chapter 2 . 2/22/2007
That story was quick as Jondy's bike... :)
| Kiwikatipo chapter 2 . 5/3/2006
Oh man I laughed so much at the epilogue that was true Mary Sue. I actually truly laughed out loud
| brittany813 chapter 2 . 1/10/2006
Lol, cute story!
| Day Dreamer chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
You have to do another one, tis funny... and which one is Mary Sue? Whatever, really good!
| Kyre chapter 2 . 9/5/2005
Hee! I'm laughing here! A very creative way to fix the world via a Mary Sue, and the last couple lines made me grin. :)
| Babyangel86 chapter 2 . 9/5/2005
I look at this, and constanly wonder why i find it so fucking amusing...
i like it... alot.
| Maria656 chapter 2 . 9/4/2005
Could do another story on M/L's adventure with kids [wink, hint, nudge]
| Anon chapter 2 . 9/4/2005
Hilarious.. I'm still laughing :)
| Aerie chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
This is a delightful little story. I started laughing out loud at "Alec swept her off her feet" and didn't stop until the end.
My favorite line in the story is at the end. "I need to fix that. And so she did."
I hope you decide to post the epilogue.
| Babyangel86 chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
you already know how i feel about this... its hilarious...
hm... maybe make more mary sue type chapters... they're fun... you can have a whole Sue-saga or something...?
i love this stuff...
| HoneyX5-452 chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
This was really good ;-) Loved the comment at the end with max and logan and that she gonna kill him ;-)
btw, would be nice if you read and reviewed some of my stuff too sometime!
| Rita chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Keep going it was really good cant wait for ore
| Kyre chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Ha! Mary Sue-I love it! I like the line and the joke, and the story was well written. Nice jokb.
| mizukimarr910 chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
HELL YES, you can't metion maxlogan the virus and heat all in one without a little action come on please. it's not as if there's enough max logan to read anyways. please please please keep writing and update again soon.
p.s. you got three more pleases then most people consider begged.