Reviews for The Last Thoughts of Alice
Mercy Ally 'Thairis chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
beautiful and very dramatic. Good work
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Wow! Good story! Another good PoV. Very well done.
Anna chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
I love Alice and Uncas fanfics! This was great. Thanks
RC chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Aw, so sad! But it was really good, and gave better inside to Alice's thoughts. I wish the movie would have gone more in depth with Alice and Uncas, but oh well. This was really good! Loved it.
mnwugn86 chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Sounds great. Just a suggestion: Maybe you could put it in the present tense (ex - She slowly steps towards the edge of the promontory). It might make it a little more dramatic.
lolita chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
very powerful, brought tears to my eyes. i am a sucker for Alice/Uncas