Reviews for True love
bluerozelovetruth chapter 1 . 3/22
NOT DISCRPITED ENOUGH AND ITS HARD TO TELL THE DIFFERENTS BETWEEN WHEN THEY ARE TALKING, THINKING, AND WHEN THEY DO SOMETHING THE MOST COMMON WAY OF HOW TO WRITE AND SHOW WHEN THEY ARE TALKING IS " " AND WHEN THEY ARE THINKING ' ' AND MOVMENT AND WHO SAID OR THOUGH WHAT NEED NOTHING AROUND THEM IF YOU ARE CONFUSE JUST READ A BOOK AND YOU'LL SEE THESE QUATS AND THEN LEARN HOW TO USE THEM, YOU CAN ALSO LOOK UP STORIES AS WELL TO SEE THIS OTHER WISE GOOD STORY
hannah ferguson chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
listen, not meanig to be rude here, but that kinda stunk. big time.
ilda chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
nice
Invisible Firebending Ninja chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
...What?
NaturallyWonderful chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
i loved it! :)
maadsinger chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
um it was good but i can't really tell who's talking um so yea...

hope you make it better :D
S. T. Nickolian chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Okay, I thought it was romantic and a bit cute, but I was having a little trouble trying to understand what you were trying to say. If you do make more, try to have them make more sense.
GuessWho25 chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
oaky i'll tell ya the truth... that made no sence what so ever i'm sorry
kat.anime chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
WOW...this is such a cute and romantic story.

I think you should continue to make romantic stories, because this one was really good.

Great Story
TsukikoAkemi chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
aw. so cute. i don't know if i already reviewed this story, but it is really cute. short, but cute. make more! these stories are so cute.
chocolatemaltesers chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
That is reall romantic, but REALLY SHORT! please do more
Tokio-Panic134 chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
aw
Jelous-of-Kagome chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Its a little hard to understand. Try spacing things out a little more. And Maybe putting your thoughts in italics. Other than that. Its really good! Nice job!

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LuckySock chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
love it
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Aw... HOW CUTE!