Reviews for The Indirect Approach
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27
This story is shit and the characters are completely unbelievable.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/21/2015
I'm watching the lake fight while reading this and the emotions are so freaking high. Man, you did it. You totally killed it. Awesome.
Aya Wanderlust chapter 3 . 6/25/2015
Super cool and exciting scenes! Love em
Aya Wanderlust chapter 2 . 6/25/2015
Ah. No wonder i had those image when you described those samurai. For some funny reason, i was thinking the same characters from bleach too!

Love your story btw
SyQadelic chapter 7 . 12/14/2013
There never really was a reason to put Hinata in this, was there? God dammit.
Vaughn Tyler chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Nice
Arkanrium chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This is the worst way to tell a story in the history of story telling... seriously.
NoneAvailable chapter 2 . 4/18/2012
Great diction, well written, nicely developed.
NoneAvailable chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
This is actually a great story. I enjoyed pretty much all of it.
Murazor chapter 7 . 1/30/2012
From a purely technical point of view, the story is well written, some of the concepts used are decently imaginative and the action sequences are pretty fun... The narrative, however, feels disjointed.

The Hinata plotline seems kind of unfinished (and she became a Chuunin, does not make a good conclusion IMO) and doesn't mesh too well with the main Naruto plotline, which leaves a fic that should be self-contained a most odd feel of being open-ended.
KrippledOne chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
This story was AWESOME! The characters, the fighting the ending. This, this might as well be canon Naruto. I mean seriously it was that good. Just, awesome job Sh33p. See ya!
MinoAcid chapter 7 . 4/19/2011
Dude... Have you stopped writing in ? NOOO!

Fic

Awesome! Now I want to write a Naruto Fic...

*Googles for a torrent of a collection of Naruto Manga from Chapter 1 - 500*
Stygian Styx chapter 7 . 2/23/2011
Great story!
eagermeager chapter 7 . 12/6/2010
You did good my friend. You did good.
WritingRin chapter 7 . 10/24/2010
[For all of a moment, Naruto had felt his palm against Kazuma's heartbeat.]

Ugh that's so nasty and I won't say awesome because loving violence is bad. But from a literary perspective, wow you really thought about this and wrote it.

[If you can't figure out what connection Tenraimaru had with all of this without me spelling it out for you, I'm not even gonna bother .]

Jiraiya's illegit. kiddie? I'm guessing...

Ok. That was a fantastic story. Not to long, fits into canon pretty well, super entertaining... and way darker/more real than other FFs I've read. There's really nothing bad I can say about this one. I will be checking out your other stories now :D
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