Reviews for Present
animecatgirl23 chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
LMAO:laughing my a** off

That was cute and funny!Please go to my profile i have a story to.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Not bad, but you might like to work on it a little bit more.
Joshah chapter 1 . 4/17/2006

that was hilarious!poor was a great side story!If your going to make more fics please tell me.
cjm chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
thats so cute! i love this game and this is a cute side story _
Kusabi Makabe chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Awesome! I love Norn so much; she should be the queen of the world. Except then she'd starve everybody. Eh, well...good fic!
Erin Elric chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
*luaghes* Funny very funny. Giving Norn catnip *laughes*
ChibiRaccoon chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
that was great. I loved it.
Atelier fan chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
It seems like it came out of the game... beautiful.
Tsekura Kentetsu chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
That is freakin' hilarious! I love it! Norn is so cool! She's my favorite character! Will this continue at all? If not, oh well, i still love it!
tarnthedarkknight chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
OMG! This was so funny! Dude, you rock! I love the story! My favorite was the "my precious" part! Keep writing!
Diana Artemis Irving chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Cool story, it made me laugh! Are you going to be putting up more chapters? 'Cuz if you are, be sure to tell me!_
lil-creator chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
YAY! BLAME DELSUS! nice story anywayz
Griffinkhan chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
*dies laughing*

That was highly amusing, Omni. Thank you so much for writing it. XD

Poor Delsus... he never gets a break, does he?