| Reviews for The Pain That Love Causes |
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   BGuate224 chapter 13 . 12/30/2009 okay i really like the story but you completely confused me with the whole 'Virotes Gte' thing. I must admitt it is original and i would like to see more of it |
| heartfire95 chapter 13 . 11/8/2009 hey i'm a huge fan of yours i have read all your storys and i like them . Especially the pain that love causes and i can't wait for four to finish it . please finish it . |
| Kayziii chapter 13 . 8/15/2009 You have to continue please! I love your story! |
| himekie chapter 4 . 3/16/2009 it's not over is it? |
| RaInDroPs614 chapter 13 . 11/17/2008 mg u really need to continue this story its really good so far |
| milkchocolatehot64 chapter 13 . 7/22/2008 COL! THAT WAS GREAT! BUT WHY DID U TAKE OUT CHAPTERS 14 AND 15! I'M STILL WAITING FOR CHAPTER 16! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CH(S)! |
| Sheena Dunlop chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 Just in the first paragraph i've already noticed some grammar / spelling things wrong. Nothing horrible, just typos and stuff that could easily be fixed just by re-reading through your chapters before posting them. You kinda get out of character with Raven, and I dont think starfire would resort to the whole "dark clothes" thing, despite how depressed she was. seems a little middle school. I did like how you put in Starfire's thoughts as she argued back and forth with herself about Robin. Kudos on that :) mind taking a look at my own TT story "passion"? Dont feel obligated or anything, just a suggestion lol -SheenaDunlop |
| fionagurls1301 chapter 13 . 5/13/2008 plz continue! |
| cuteknight101 chapter 13 . 5/4/2008 please write more cause i love your story please! |
| erikhet chapter 8 . 4/9/2008 OMFG, I'm a Gemini too! But i prefer Gemileo, because I was supposed to be a Leo, and for some reason I match either both descriptions of Geminis and Leos or mostly Leo descriptions. So I prefer both. Iono which ones the saddest. I guess you're right with the Afershock eppies and all. Snowblind too... |
| erikhet chapter 7 . 4/9/2008 Purple. Have none, maybe Christina Aguilera or Alicia Keys Loved it. But then again, I can see the RedStarxStarfire shippers now. But it was cute how she said Robin's name before she passed out in the snow... I felt really bad for Red Star thoough. I was like, "NO! HE CAN'T DIE!" Sry for reviewing so late, like I said b4, I haven't read in a while. Oh, and FYI, in my new story 'Assassin's Bird', there'll be an appearance from "Mark Xavier Redd". *hinthint* Thanks for remembering me and letting me remeber my old story. I forgot I named him Mark too, lol. I thought I called him . Bye |
| erikhet chapter 4 . 4/8/2008 Terra in the show is a'ight, but in the comics she was a super bitch who murdered BBs parents. That's why they broke up in the comics, when he found out. OMFG, I haven't read this story in, like, ever! I forgot how good it was... I also got a new comp, so allmy Favorites on the internet browser were gone, and I needed to find new ones. Oh, and by me giving you the idea, do you mean from my story 'The Mark Of Hidden Treasure'? If you liked it, sorry I deleted it. I reread my review that I posted here, saw that it had been updated since I last read this story (chap.2), and decided to see what was up. I also think Mento was mean to cute lil BB too. That is all. Sry bout the ober long review. See yas. |
| Plia chapter 13 . 7/26/2007 omg i love this story so much it actually made me cry you have to finish it please please please |
| puppyeyes135 chapter 13 . 5/26/2007 OMG...the story you made about Virote's Gate is really sad.I really like all of your stories!Great job!PLEASE UPDATE NOW! |
| milkshakelvr chapter 13 . 12/6/2006 please finish this story i wanna see how it ends! PLEASE! |