I ultra love it!

I super love it!

I love it!

I accidently stumbled upon this story on a random site back in 2000 or 2001. I was 12 years old and this story introduced me to the wonderful world of fanfiction. I have been writing fanfiction ever since. I am 23 now and I still find myself coming back to this story from time to time hoping there will be another chapter.

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story with our beloved Tenchi characters. It was greatly appreciated and it was very well done.

I remember reading this story a long long time ago, when I was first introduced to fanfiction. Tenchi was the first anime I had ever seen and I was hooked immediately by it's story line and engaging characters.

In true spirit I feel that same connection with this story, in my humble opinion it is the best facfic of Tenchi Muyo! to date, and so far as I've read, none have come close to topping the level of this piece.

It's been...I dunno, 5 or six years since I last saw this story, and judging by the posting date it's been four years since it was updated last. Still, I would love to see a finale no matter how rushed it would be.

Please please please, wrap up this story. The latest chapter was so good I remembered everything that I haven't read in years. Thank you for this story, it inspires many of us would be writers to achieve something better than half of what is called TM!FF.

...AND WHY DID YOU NEVER FINISH THIS. ;~;

Eight years ago I stumbled upon this story on TMFFA. It was my introduction into the world of fan fiction. Only two chapters had been posted at the time, and I devoured every single word with vigor. Not being in possession of my own computer, and still living life at the tender age of thirteen or fourteen, I did what any irrational young teen would have done: printed out the entire story. The decision ate up two cartridges of black ink from my father's printer and a shout-fest but I had obtained a new best friend.

Over the next couple of years this had proved to be a good decision, for life had become an inescapable turmoil with little room to retreat. But I still had my unfinished love story to rediscover and immerse myself into, always carefully hidden in plain sight.

Eventually life evened out and cooled down. I did not know it then, but my favorite fan fiction had shaped my taste in what to look for in a love partner. And I experienced my first wonderful sensation of falling in love. Let me tell you, looking back on it all, she was practically the Ryoko you portrayed. Eventually this woman disappeared from my life, and so did the story. Ironically it being hidden in plain sight was the reason for its absence.

I experienced love lost over and over again in the years that followed, grew up, started writing fan fiction of my own, and turned out to be an all-in-all okay person. Now, in my senior year of college, while clearing out all of my childish possessions from my past and preparing to start out into a life of my own with someone I care for more than any other, I came across the dusty pages again, hidden in plain sight. I read every word, now with the trained literary mind and eyes of an adult. I laughed at the little mistakes, but found them to be priceless personality traits belonging to an old friend.

The decision to find out if there ever was more to the story came about just the other sleepless night, and for it to be on a website I frequent nearly stunned me. I have just finished reading the third chapter, and all the imagination I put into filling in the blanks feels finally honored, complete, closed.

Thank you, from the bottom of my heart and soul, thank you. This tale of a small family in the mountains becoming whole once more has affected my personality and values in ways I could not recognize until now. I know now what inspiration truly is, and I have you to thank for that. I hope you are at peace and your life is wonderful, for that is what you inspire in me to have.

I just wanted to tell you that I have really enjoyed your story. I found myself choked up at the end, which rarely happens to me, so good job. I know that it has been a while since you have writen on this story, but I just wanted to tell you that you have a great talent, so don't let it get away from you.

Please update! This is one of my fav. stories ever! you got a great job here, please keep it.

wow when did this last chapter come out? I was just rereading this story for nostalgia sake and suddenly came across this. wow! this was great! i love it!

Wow, wow, and... wow. This is a fantastic story. I remember reading this a few years ago on the origional TMFFA site, and I was so disapointed when it did not continue. And now, not only was it a joy to read it again, but it had new chapters! (YAY!) But, then, what's this? No new update for...five months? Grr.. DO I HAVE TO BEAT YOU WITH A STICK? Oh! I, uh, err... *sweatdrops* I mean, please, you must continue with your fabulous work. *bows politely* As for constructive criticism, besides the occasional typos, there is one thing. You have a habit of switching between past and present tense, which throws of the reading a bit. One rule of writing is "Pick a tense, and stick to it!" If you corrected this and the typos, you're story telling would be just about seamless. Of course, I know how difficult it can be to proof read your own work, so I'd be more than happy to offer my assistance, if you'd like. E-mail me ~_

Nice one, I like it but there are "some" mistakes or "not hittinng OVA", one for certain is the part with Tenchi's and Ryoko's "first" fight against oni-chan () Tenchi creates the LHW completly by his own he didn't need Tsunami or a connection to her also LHWs can only be negated by other LHWs, but I think this mistake must not be one maybe there are other reasons why he coldn't activate his LHWs, so all in all it is a fine work I'm looking forward for the next chapters

This is awesome so far. Keep it up. Long hiatuses will result in a swift execution.

This was the very first fanfiction I ever read four years ago, and it's still my favorite.

I am very happy that this masterpiece will continue.

I havent read it all yet but it is a really good concept, I've enjoyed what i've read and hope to read more of your work (was really sad to see Ryoko has died).