Reviews for Because of You
MsRyomaPotter chapter 53 . 4/4/2014
Oh my god! That was so sad! Good storyline though! It made me cry!
cdelosre2006 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Who is who in the story? I'm guessing that the last person listed on the Forewards is Shizuka, Hua Zhe Lei is Rui and Shan Cai is Tsukushi. I think.
b.aka-chan xD chapter 53 . 11/15/2010
there's nothing left to say except: awwwwwwww~~~~ 3
busta911 chapter 53 . 11/14/2010
Great story, but very sad at the end. :)
b.aka-chan xD chapter 50 . 11/14/2010
i don't know if i should be happy about the last chapter or sad about this one :(
b.aka-chan xD chapter 47 . 11/12/2010
*chokes Himiko to death*

.. and this problem is solved :D
Rachela3 chapter 44 . 11/12/2010
wow! cliff hanger alert! gosh... can't wait for the next chapter.. this story is good
b.aka-chan xD chapter 44 . 11/6/2010

girl, this story is most likely going to kill ME Oo. your cliffhangers are MAD Oo
b.aka-chan xD chapter 41 . 11/5/2010
! *falls down crying* OOOOOOOOOOOOOO

you can't do this! :'(

poor Rui, poor Tsukushi (poor me who's going to be killed 'cause her scream woke up her parents Oo)
b.aka-chan xD chapter 39 . 11/5/2010
cuuuuuuuuuuuuuute 3 *-*
busta911 chapter 41 . 11/4/2010
you should write more 1 shot stories. (:
imaginativeforay chapter 38 . 11/2/2010
You're gonna continue right? The story has not yet ended right?

Though I keep correcting your pinyin, I enjoyed your story(:

however, there's something I would like to ask,

what do you mean by

bu yao zhi qu ma

in the previous chappie (36)?

Couldn't figure that one out:P

P.S. Pardon my curiosity, but are you a chinese?
imaginativeforay chapter 28 . 11/2/2010
Sorry about it!

But if you're trying to say good night, it should be

wan an (晚安)

instead of just


it's just a language expression difference(:
imaginativeforay chapter 26 . 11/2/2010

Sorry for the continuous pointing of mistakes, but...

For the previous chappie,

shen ma?

Should be

shen me? (what? 什么?)

and this chappie,


Deng (wait 等)



imaginativeforay chapter 15 . 11/2/2010
the story seems to progress very nicely except for some language errors in both English and the Chinese pinyin(:

"Jin de ma? Wei she ma?"

it's supposed to be romanised as

zhen de ma?Wei shen me?(really?Why?真的吗?为什么?)

"Wo bu ji dao... wo bu ji dao..."

supposed to be

wo bu zhi dao... (I don't know... 我不知道。。。)
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