|Reviews for Love Hina: Troubles of a Ronin|
| SavorSweet chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
XD btw i love ur story! o_o you pay for you email account?
| Ruto Kuntai chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Wow, its been ages since I read a great story with Keitaro and Naru as a couple, it had to be one of the better stories I have read in a long time. Your attention to detail and well made plot really is amazing, the way you detailed even the smallest actions was well written.
I don't see many Keitaro/Naru fanfictions that really catch my attention, but this story did. Also, great job with spelling, there weren't any errors.
Thank you for the great story,
| findingparis chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
Whew. Nice. Nice.
I couldn't say more.
KeixNaru for eternity:)
| Bobboky chapter 2 . 10/12/2005
| Baretta RETIRED SINCE JUNE06 chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
WHY! This was one of the best starts to a Kei/Naru pairing ever! Why do you have to torment us so! I cant believe it! That sucks so much!
| Darje chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
You go dude!
My fav pairing is Naru/Keitaro, SO far you have done an excellent job and the comment you made abotu character bashing is so true, some people can be so biased when they read stories.(adding to favs)
| EagleCeres chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Interesting twist on the original story, now I'm curious about how the other girls will fit in the story. Great chapter, hope to read more soon! :D
| Irritus185 chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
pretty good. a few grammar changes but it's better than what i usually do. also, the mechanics of your writing style is kinda...wonky. i'll tell you when i get to talk to you again. on a separate note...ANOTHER KEITARO/NARU LOVER! MY FRIEND! MY GLORIOUS, NON-BASHER FRIEND! ahem, not that i got that out of my system...nice job. heh, hope to read more soon
| Baretta RETIRED SINCE JUNE06 chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
You do know that this rules.
I love Keitaro/Naru pairings! Maybe you could have it as an alternate universe style thing. This started out really well and I can't wait until the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
| wxnut chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Not a bad read. Drop some of the "sadly"'s though. It's repetitive.
| Innortal chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Not a bad start. Nice to see them getting off on the right foot. Looking forward to more.
| Airtran9906 chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
wow i realy liked how this thing stated it wasn't as...painfull as the tv show i liked this maybe naru will not hit kietaro around because it started out like this and is this going to be a naru x keitaro fic i'm just wondering cause i'm really tired of all these motoko x kietaro fics until the next chapter
| Lunar Knite chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
WHE! I love Naru/Keitaro fics! I think this is a great story so far, and I can't wait to see your next installment, along with 'Blind Love'.
| vamp1000 chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
good opening. I myself hate character bashing and kei/naru forever! In the name of thy son, thy father, and thy holy ghost, amen