Reviews for Why we fight
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Nice Stroy
idol269 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Excellent story. I'd list my favorite parts, but I didn't feel like typing the whole story out again :)
azerjaban chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Lol you know when I saw your title I thought this story would be about why they fight In The War... but that was a nice surprise. Though you write steamy scenes better than fighting scenes to be honest.

Thnx for the read!

Azer
ObsessedRHShipper chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Romantic, hot, and funny at the end!
thismipiedoesntexist chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
i loved it.

very well written and composed unlike some that i've read that are plain stupid and weird. this was honestly really good. probably one of the best mature ones i've ever read.

good job.

keep it up.

:)
trish.brides chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
that was hot! i loved it!
wallflower1332 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
i liked this ;)
Muslix chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
beautiful
kittyluvr chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
This is very well written. It's a very impressive piece of writing, especially for a oneshot. You did a very good job of introducing the story, characters and situation. You didn't make the story lengthy or wordy but it had the perfect depth of description. It's difficult to write sex scenes because it is so hard to describe the physical act as well as the feelings involved without it sounding like porn and I think you did a good job of avoiding that. I did notice your use of the word "member" however. I am not a big fan of that nickname of the male genitals becuase it is mainly used in a silly way just to get a laugh (if you've seen the movie Mean Girls you might understand what I'm talking about) but I think you got away with it becuase of the way you wrote the rest of the story. All I can really say in the end is well done!

Wuv Kitty :)
elfwarden chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Really nice.

Wel done

elfwarden
californiagirl1426 chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
That was hot. I loved how you did all of the detailing. I'm just wondering one thing, was it Ron's first time too?
There's Nothing on the Radio chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
That was nice, I'm with Ron though. they shoulda stayed in the kitchen but I loved it.
IamHermioneGranger chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Lol, the humor, I just had to add it to my favorites. Ron must really like the kitchen.

~Serenity
goldenbubbles chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
wow that was good. You know what i really liked was that the sex scene was graphic but still romantic and it lasted a good long time. Most people tend to rush them but i liked how extended and detailed this one was. I try to make mine full of detail but i don't think any are quite as good as this one.
Sarcastic102391 chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
very well writen please write more stories
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