|Reviews for Breathe|
| roxi39 chapter 9 . 11/11/2006
Chapter 9 was very good and the whole story described 628's life and emotions very well.
Personally, I particularly enjoyed the introduction, as to me, this part of the story appeared to be full of metaphysical and philosophical ideas.
I like metaphysics and philosophy, although I am rather bad at it, as I am 13 years old, in Class 9 and, sometimes, I am not capable of imagining things which range further than anti-matter.
I always talk about metaphysics with my father and nearly always, I grow enthusiastic and then, I am able to discuss metaphysics properly with my father, I understand all that he says better and I bring forth some ideas of my own. Whenever I am filled with enthusiasm about metaphysics, I also manage to picture anti-matter more clearly inside my head.
I also adore mathematics and I am attempting to do the maths for Class 11 and the maths for Classes 12 and 13 too, later on.
I also write episodes about experiment 625. Me writing about experiment 625 has been inspired by the author called fshlvr.
This is all I have got to say for now. My e-mail address If it is in your interest, you could review.
Yours sincerely roxi39
| Aggie chapter 9 . 7/13/2006
This story, is the BEST story I've ever read, but at the time there were like, only 7 chapters, so... and I waited & waited for new chapters, but there weren't any, so... I stopped checking back. But NOW! Now I see 2 new chapters! I'm happy now! You need feul to your fire? Did this help? I hope so, 'cause I need to know what happens to 628, Vangilis, 426, and so on! PLLEAASSE! :/ (whoa, that took a lot of brain power... I need a break...)
| Writingcritter chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
your really good at making all the characters speak they way they normally do. i'm impressed.
| Ecliptic chapter 9 . 5/26/2006
*feels special* These people make me look realy good about now n.n. Yeah, the slackers... it isn't THAT hard to write a review.
So, um, I kinda just scanned over this one n.n; but I remember what happened cuz you sent me teh chappie... and I just thought I'd make another review to make myself look uber better than the other reviewers. *cough*
And again I shall repeat... GASP Stitch is loosin' his teeth :0
And it looks like you added stuff to here that wasn't on the file you sent me... or maybe I'm just absent-minded.
And um.. I know there was more, but I can't remember o.O; oh well. It'll come back eventually.
| MarkKB chapter 9 . 5/22/2006
This is one awesome story. Rock on!
| BlobIsNotOnFanfictionDotNet chapter 9 . 5/17/2006
I'm reviewing. You are teh awesome. Keep it up.
| Ri2 chapter 9 . 5/16/2006
Oh. Now we know how 426 became what he is now.
And...628's having strange thoughts? Should we worried about this?
What's wrong with Stitch's teeth?
| Ecliptic chapter 8 . 4/30/2006
n.n Oh that 628... just so cute and hugable. Now, let's see if I can make this review be somewhat deep and meaningful. And before I forget, you mispelled sink by spelling it 'zinc'. Anywho, I like all the description about how 628 takes in practically EVERYTHING, for some reason I find it enjoyable to read...
And I just have to comment about how you manage to make all the characters words and stuff sound like they would on the movie. Usually I can never find something like that here... I'm not even sure I got it right in my fanfics...
So, yeah, I think that's all I can say. No wait! There's more... did you notice that now when you review something there's a spelling check option? Fanfiction's getting fancy.
| ecliptic chapter 7 . 12/1/2005
Oh, I'm special, my SA page is being advertized XD.
Yes, so anyway, great chappie. Very, very interesting. And I lurve the powers the Grand Councilwomen's got _..
The next chappie will have 628 in it, right?
| RI2 chapter 7 . 11/28/2005
Cameo? What would I appear as?
That was just...whoa. I had no idea Miss Councilwoman could do all that.
And in the end, it wasn't enough, was it? Jeez...
That was frigging awesome. It really was, you know that?
| largefish8 chapter 7 . 11/28/2005
So the grand councilwoman is an Eldar. Are you using the eldar race from Warhammer 40,0? Update soon.
| vALOCO chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Totally Horibble! (gags)
| Ri2 chapter 6 . 10/26/2005
Cameo appearance? Aw, you don't have to do that...
So he's psychic, huh? Neat.
I've mentioned before how incredibly well you describe his experiences of being a newborn, haven't I?
| Kila chapter 6 . 10/25/2005
I just don't like talking in e-mail... there's this board called Stitch's Cousins, it's a great place to talk.
I find the experiment-learning-how-to-live thing... fascinating. It inspires me. Which is rather dangerous, come to think of it...
| Ecliptic chapter 6 . 10/25/2005
w00t! Camos... nothing excites us more than seeing our characters placed randomly in a story . we're all easily amused..
628's so cute...*squeezes him*