Reviews for The First Man Down
LOLfinally chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
That was really nice! :)
Midnight-Apple Blossom chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Aw. Did the flooding of Hyrule happen in a game, or did you make that up?
Life-is-Raspberry-Pie chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
An excellent story about loss that turns into hope. Well-written!
akw99 chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Hey, awesome story! Really sad, but I like the ending. Damn Ganondorf...anyways, what happened to Link? I would like to have more info on what Link did. Anyways, great story!
sela-chan chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
I guess it's rushed, and you're skipping over events without much detail... but it's a great fic.
eternalnemesis chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Um...not bad...but things kind of happened TOO fast, know what I mean? I like how you made this fic towards the idea of Wind Waker, but still, the events passed too quickly. Don't you think that the guards would be skeptical of Malon, as well as the King? The wind came too suddenly, the guards were alerted too quickly, and war and devastation happened upon them too soon.

I know it's a oneshot-I'm just trying to help you out. I still liked the idea for the fic though!