|Reviews for Payment|
| BrassCupcake76 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Great story. You have a wonderful way of writing that really paints the picture, keeps the reader engaged and wanting more. I would love to see a follow up or continuation to this story as the ending seemed to leave room for one. I hope you write more!
| KittyDoggyLover chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
This is Paige from
I loved it.
| sn855850 chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Great story! Too bad you didn't let Dee Dee admit to being in love with Hunter.
| Catwoman15 chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Very nice job! The plot is interesting and well thought out, and your grammar, spelling and punctuation usage is wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your stories.