|Reviews for Scorched Earth|
| Arpad Hrunta chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Yeah, this one is right on. I like the cauterization analogy - it really works.
I wish they would have addressed this in the series, other than his curt "Don't" to her the next time he saw her.
| Aeidhryn chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
A numb feel, a good ending line.
| uwprincess chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
I really liked that. I too am wondering what the five words are. Nice job.
| JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
You have me wondering what are the 5 words?... Great short...
| Del64 chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
"He doesn't notice that his hands are shaking."
This is beautiful and haunting. You say so much with so few words, and that is extremely hard to do. Thank you very much, and I hope you write more!