Reviews for Helplessly Hopelessly Falling in Love
sniperalchemist chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
another great songfic! -huggles fic- i have no complaints, as the song matched perfectly with what you wrote!
Hayashi Azuma chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
ah, very good!

i hope that you write more!

'please, keep writing!'
Fireness chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Hi, it's me Fireness, you replied to my review asking how you ruined the ending. I can tell you by quoting just one of your sentences: "He pulled her into an embrace, kissing the top of her head. “I love you Riza. Ever since I first laid my eyes on you. I just didn’t know how to express myself,” he said, looking down at her"

It's cliche, it's abrupt, it's over done. Everyone else likes it because that's what they're used to, or else they don't write very much. The concept of him "always" loving her just doesn't make any sense to me whatsoever. It's unrealistic. But up until then, you were doing fantastic.

(P.s., don't mind me, I'm just a pessimist. check out my little drabblet, The Worst Wound. I found it quite entertaining, others disagree...)
rainismysunshine chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
once again...aw! so swet!

Rayne
Mikazuki Amay not logged in chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Continue this, damnit! It kicks MEGA ass!

Down with RoyxEd, they are NOT gay!

I'm a total Royai shipper! _
Fireness chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
I'm sorry, but I have to say it: you ruined the ending. But other than that this fic love.
Fabi Washu chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
It's just amazing! I loved!

Please, write more about them, they are so cute!

Fabiana
anarchy101 chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
aw, very well written
Pocket-Mandy-Mae chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
cute!
MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Very cool.
Frip-Ouille chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
I like it ! Love is all around.