Reviews for College Days: The First Semester
RabulaTasa chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
An entire prison guarded by retired staff NCO's? Damn, that's no picnic... although, I've never met a GySgt who didn't have a very highly developed sense of humor, so odds are that the prisoners at least won't be bored.

screaming phoenix chapter 6 . 10/31/2007
Sir: I enjoy your stories to the have a most distinctive style and it is with a remarkable talent for alleration that makes your stories come alive. Bravo Sir!

I hope you will contune with this story.I eagerly await more.
Danny-171984 chapter 6 . 10/30/2007
Okay...was that it? Please tell me your working on the sequel...But at least we know a little bit of who was Sparks worked with. I'll be waiting for an update...I'll check your profile right now to see what is up...

Danny-171984 chapter 5 . 10/30/2007
Crappy ending...If there was no epilogue I would be extremely mad. That was quite the story. Ron was coolio! I hope Spark gets his balls cut off. He deverses it. I'm glad that Ron didn't die...But now to the 'real' ending part.

Danny-171984 chapter 4 . 10/30/2007
Excellent chapter. "And the truth will set you free!" That bastard. Using cheap tricks like that. Not everyone are like that. I'm sorry for his tradegy and pain, but it is not the same for everyone. I hope things goes well for Kim and Ron. I'm glad that Ron got his MMP back. He is the Chosen One. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Danny-171984 chapter 3 . 10/30/2007
This is so wacked! That bastard. I wish Ron beats the hell out of him. Not only did he kiss her again but he made Kim feel something that it's rightfuly Ron privilege. That bites...Hope Kim's mom will put Ron on an update ASAP...Off to the next chapter!


P.S. Love your story :D
Danny-171984 chapter 2 . 10/30/2007
That bastard...I really hate that guy. No one touches her lips except for one goofy boy with blond hair! The rest of the story was great. You describe college life great. I remember when I moved into the dorms the first year. It was such a great experience. The History Professor was crazy, but it was fun to read. I wish my World History Professor was like that. It would be so fun to be on his class. Well, until next time.

Danny-171984 chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Sooner or later, this was going to happen. I hope their bond is strong enough...

Ezbok58a chapter 6 . 2/11/2007
Hmm, interesting followup.

Look foward to more
CastaS chapter 6 . 2/9/2007
great epilogue, i enjoyed much to reread the story.
SassMasterGeneral chapter 6 . 2/7/2007
Surprised that this chapter popped up, sadden it wasn’t about Ron’s recovery. But Then I read you plan to expand the story arc and I’m happy again :)

I always new college was evil ;)
mkusenagi2 chapter 5 . 2/5/2007
A VERY engrossing tale. I tip my hat to you WesUAH.

CastaS chapter 5 . 9/22/2006
great story, excellent work, i love it
dartblade chapter 5 . 6/10/2006
cool story man cant wait to finish reading the other stuff
xx.xx.x.x.x.xxxx.x.x.x.x.x.x chapter 5 . 11/23/2005
Wow, that's one long chapter. I wasn't even able to finish it in one sitting, more like about three or four. Anyway, another solid chapter, and I really enjoyed it.

First off, I like how you write your action scenes. Full of detail, almost seeming like too much... The pacing was brilliant once again, reminding me of how well 'The Fallen' flowed during the fight scene at the end.

Something that I found in the chapter that I admire is how you show the power of love. I, myself, believe that there is nothing stronger. I guess that's why I bring that element out in my stories as well.

I did find maybe one or two small grammer mistakes. I would point them out, but since they were noticed so far in the beginning, I can't even remember where they were.

Other than that, I thought the chapter ended kinda suddenly. A little more of a resolution would have been nice, but with the chapter being as long as it was, I don't blame you for the abrupt end.

All in all, definately some of the best you've written. The chapter being a little long and having a sudden ending isn't enough for me to whine about it. The content of the story is what mattered, and it was superb.
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