|Reviews for Simplicity is Complexity|
| jacky.jai1 chapter 2 . 2/28
| destiny chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Wow,whoa,amazing,fantastic,interesting, and what ever other words that can explain the awesomeness of this fanfic!
| Gamakage chapter 16 . 3/21/2013
16 chapter and im done.. uf... i thought this will be nice story. it was NaruHina.. damn i did read before horrible things that did make me almost vomit.. really disgusting things and even those horrible harems.. but this story.. wow.. itś on top of it... like ur first stories that trilogy.. maybe u should have stay with it..
| tokiohotellover94 chapter 8 . 2/8/2013
Good lord, i know this hasnt been updated in so long, bus as a fellow writter i must be honest, i couldnt make it to the end! Why is Naruto attracted to Hanab?! Its beyond pedophilic! She is' 10 in this story and i guess it wasnt soo bad but seriously?! He was flirting and being mre into her than into Hinata, and while we are on the subject of Hinata, why is she always crying?! In The Manga, Hinata hasn't cried, not once! Shes one of the only people who hasnt cried and all of a sudden shes like a waterfall?! Youve made her far too weak! Its insulting to her chatacter, and honestly i completely respect your need to be "original" however all the above would be a moot point IF and ONLY IF your writting style wasnt so confusing. You change back and forth from p.o.v, and its just extremely confusing and doesnt work plus you lack sentence structure, some of your lines do not make sense. It was just extremely confusing. All that being said i do respect that you tried and im sure you have certainly improved since this time. Ill deffinetly look up your more recent work. Oh and before i forget, you try to make Naruto seem too smart and to superior, it ruins his character.
| Amer Leon chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
wow! wonderful chapter and writing. this is sooo cool. I was a little sad to see that you are going to make it a love triangle...i just think that hinata is to great to have naruto distracted...i will read and enjoy until you get into either that or a harem situation...both, i think, degrade these two characters. but...it is your story!
| spike1212 chapter 5 . 7/12/2012
omfg, i pissed myself laughing at this soccer game hahahaha great work!
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
OMG THAT WAS SO FUNNY! HAHA I LOVE IT THAT WAS GREAT! I LAUGHED SO HARD I WAS IN PAIN! :D
| Misery-Known chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
you know man.. I've been following your story Simplicity is Complexity ever since you started it, it was a story that i loved to read, even reread over and over, because even if Naruto is a tad morbid and sarcastic, you manage to make him pull it off. And i loved that about this story, it would just be awesome if you decided to come back and perhaps finish it. Even if your faith in has died and been ashes in the wind.
| FUCK YOU chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
um... how long is this date going to last goddamit
| narutos vixen chapter 11 . 8/3/2009
the scene where you made naruto bet jiraiya up was that from the rick james chronicals in the dave chappelle classic _
| jujubeeza chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
It too bothers me to no end when I look for a story with Naruto paired with someone, and over half of the results are with Sasuke.
Loved this first chapter. You can really get an idea of how deep her affections are for him because she cleaned his house for over two years. Cleaning a house is no small feat, and to do it for that length of time really shows how strong her love is.
| AirCloud chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Hi! Loved this! ( first chappie anyways since its all I have read so far) I totally agree, in my opinion yaoi is just disgusting ( no offence to all you yaoi fans out there). NaruHina is also my favorite pairing too! Right now I'm writing a story about NaruHina so don't worry there are still some straight pairing supporters out there! :)
| Kailamiko chapter 24 . 6/30/2009
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE unless you want to die slowly and painfully just kidding anyways great story i hope you continue one of this days, which is not likely
| unowat chapter 15 . 5/4/2009
dude seriously. drugs. u are so turning naruto to a sadist. wait maybe u are writing about a reflexion of yourself...who nos
oh and im not a dude. dude
great story though
pervert much but great.
| razeblaze chapter 24 . 4/19/2009
Wow, this story sure was long, naruto was so many different things in this story it was hard to get used to it. Naruto being an artisan masturbation helper, takes drugs, he's a player, a charmer, and a whole lot of other crap. Nonetheless the story is very amusing. When I first read that Naruto loved hinata but didn't want to be with her because he was undead, I had a feeling u might have turned her into an undead as well. To bad there was no lemon, but it IS rated T.
But I'm not here to boast about how clever I was with my pridictions of this selection. This was great, and I can't wait to read more. And if you run out of idea's, let me know, i might help u come up with something. But until then great work