Reviews for Foster Everlasting
AnonymousM chapter 20 . 11/22/2017
I really liked this ending! Even though she didn't end up with Jesse, I think it was better because she was making a good life for herself, not dependent on a man. (Though James is there, and a cutie, he is not the reason for her happiness.)

I think too few fics address what Winnie would do without Jesse-it's a big decision to make, and it really shouldn't be just about him.

I do find Jesse forgetting Winnie to be implausible, I prefer to more think that he moved on than he forgot. (Or, well, tried to move on.) Actually, before James came into the picture, I wasn't sure if you were leaning towards Winnie getting together with Miles-especially because he saw her in town. Poor Miles...

I also didn't see the reverend thing coming, but I did like it! It was interesting and overall I enjoyed your story quite a lot :)
LittleNoodleSoup chapter 21 . 1/30/2015
Good job on the story
lovexisxamazing86 chapter 21 . 1/8/2015
I like the alternate ending better
LittleNoodleSoup chapter 17 . 4/27/2014
She isn't supposed to be hurt. Jesse fell out a tree on his head and didn't hut him a bit. Tuck shot himself and he didn't feel it. Miles got bitten by a posinus snake and Hesse ate posinus mushrooms.
LittleNoodleSoup chapter 6 . 4/27/2014
Why?
LittleNoodleSoup chapter 5 . 4/27/2014
Why oh why oh why did you kill Winnie's love.
LittleNoodleSoup chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Wow! Can Jesse and Winnie get together then?
nadely chapter 21 . 3/1/2014
thank you for giving us this alternative will help with my poster
Maddelynn Sky chapter 21 . 2/8/2013
Thanks for writing a new ending to tuck everlasting, the one in the book sucked and the movie was so far off the book i imaged it as a totally different story.
Nicole Leanette chapter 21 . 10/24/2012
'Now goodnight and get out of here!'

LOL sounds like something I would say to my boyfriend.

What an amazing ending that was

Reading the last chapter I was like; Well this is gonna kill me even more than the original ending

Butt!, noooooo! You made me smile.;)
Nicole Leanette chapter 15 . 10/24/2012
I must say, you are a fantastic writer.
Nicole Leanette chapter 7 . 10/24/2012
HE DESERVES A TIMEOUT!

Make sure hes sitting on a hard wood chair in a corner facing the wall..

AND NO TOYS ALLOWED!

Teehee..
Nicole Leanette chapter 6 . 10/24/2012
Eurgh, i still despise her.
Nicole Leanette chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
Jesse! GAAAHHHHH YOU IDDDDIIIIIOOOOOTTTTT!

You killin me. Ya really killin me.
Nicole Leanette chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Now I just want to murder that chick.

Meh. Winnie. NOOOO!
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