Reviews for Not What It Seems
Litta chapter 15 . 5/1/2010
This was a great story! I loved how you gave Obi-Wan a small romance, but still kept true to his vows as a Jedi to give up romance in his life. I especially enjoyed the epilogue, as it did a good job of summing up how their lives went on. Great writing!
jedi keliam kenobi chapter 16 . 7/9/2004
it was a brilliant story. i truely enjoyed it.
jedi keliam kenobi chapter 16 . 7/9/2004
it was a brilliant story. i truely enjoyed it.
Aelimir chapter 15 . 11/20/2003
This was a great story! Almost as good as "Following your Heart" and the sequel. I just found you and your stories. You are an amazing author! Could you please, please write more on "For better or for Worse"? Maybe you could somehow skip to when Anakin goes to the dark side or something. Sari could help Obi through that tough time. I don't care what you do, even if it's very AU - just please write more? :) I'll review every chapter you post!
Aelimir chapter 15 . 11/20/2003
This story was really good! Almost as good as "Following your Heart" and "For Better or for Worse." Will you please finish "For Better or for Worse?" Maybe you could make it a complete AU, or somehow skip ahead to Anakin going to the dark side. Obi would need Sari to help him get through that. Whatever you do- I don't care- just write more :)
Aelimir chapter 15 . 11/20/2003
I just found your story! This was really great! But I liked "Following your Heart" and "For Better or for Worse" will you please finish it? Maybe you could somehow skip ahead to when Anakin goes to the dark side, and Sari could help him through that tough time.
Fran chapter 16 . 11/1/2002
I know you posted this ages ago, but I've only just found it now. :) I thought it was *brillient*- one of the best SW stories I've ever read. Nice to have one that's got all the passion and love of a romance whilst still accepting the inevitable bitter-sweet ending that has to come when we're talking Jedi. Makes it much more real than the stories that try and make it work out, somehow. And no porn, which is always a plus. ;)

I thought it was lovely, so nice one- great story there!
Arevir chapter 16 . 5/19/2002
IT'S ME! HAHAHAAH! You thought you'd never hear from me again? Remember? ~*Madison*~ I kept begging for your e-mail? Well I have been going through alot an I remembered you. I just wanted to finish this story. Nice chatting, give me your new e-mail!
Ghost chapter 15 . 4/7/2002
Wow! You are really good at this, arn't you? I only found three faults. First, Obi tended to forget that he had Force Powers (if I were him, I'd just yank the blaster out of Jex's hand when he threatened Arella). Second, I find it a bit odd that the Shean didn't just complain to the Senate. If Shreeana is a member of the Republic it has to obey it's laws. You can't just treat people any way you want. And third, the sad ending. I *hate* sad endings! SAD ENDINGS ARE THE DARK SIDE!

Ehm, but other then that, it's a good story :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2002
I really liked this story a lot, definitely made my top ten list, but the ending (after Jex arrived)seemed a little too rushed, and the time jump was confusing. Other than that, keep writing!
Em584 chapter 16 . 1/18/2002
I loved it! You are such a great writer, I always enjoy reading all of your fics!
Jaded1 chapter 14 . 1/9/2002
If all else fails; kiss the Jedi [wink] I couldn't resist adding that...great character developement, and buildup to conclusion, though it seems you've glossed over a bit at the end - or maybe I just want to read more...
Jaded1 chapter 15 . 1/9/2002
sweet ending; but I got a bit confused at first with the time jump. A well-written 'angsty with hope' fic, as I like to call them.
Digital Prism chapter 16 . 1/6/2002
great story! i really like the plot, and the way that you write is amazing! *_*
Eloquea chapter 15 . 1/4/2002
You are the most amazing writer ever. The way you put words, how you made each character reveal himself/herself little by little, it's simply wonderful. I loved it from beginning to end! Would you mind if I use a similar plot for a fanfic of my own? I'll of course give you credit. Keep up the excellent writing!
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