|Reviews for Inventor No More|
| Anonymous chapter 7 . 12/24/2011
This has to be my favorite of your stories; I can so picture it being an episode! I nearly cried for Bright Heart (I know; I'm soft XP) but the ending made me smile. Keep it up!
| Ted chapter 7 . 3/16/2008
I thought that was very touching, how Bright Hart's friends helped him. I could feel the emotion and conflict in this story.
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 7 . 6/2/2007
nice! at least bright heart has learned something important from all this!
| Emron chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Poor Bright Heart!
| Michael Adams chapter 4 . 9/1/2006
All of the chapters have stopped working for me :( What I've read so far is great though!
| WretchedWords chapter 7 . 9/25/2005
*starts slow clap*
a good ending to a good story. nice job. :D
| eagle205 chapter 7 . 9/25/2005
Great ending! Keep up the good work!
| Fauna Greywolf chapter 7 . 9/25/2005
YES! now everything is right with the world again. awesome story.
| sun tzu1 chapter 7 . 9/25/2005
Phew. Finally got his brain back on track.
Great story. I think you did a pretty good job showing Bright Heart's self-destruction.
| Mariel1 chapter 7 . 9/24/2005
*applauds* What a great way to end things! If Soulful Heart does have a talent for something (besides acting like a crab _), it would be insight; seeing through the lies people tell themselves. Great story.
| sun tzu1 chapter 6 . 9/18/2005
Phew. Finally a step in the right direction...And you make it a mini-sized chapter. You sadistic author, you.
| Mariel1 chapter 6 . 9/17/2005
Wow...I can't wait for the next chapter! I can't imagine what Soulful will say, or how he'll react...A little on the short side, but great job!
| Alexander-Crossover chapter 5 . 9/14/2005
Yikes, Can't say I saw that coming even considering the story and the author (no offense)
| eagle205 chapter 5 . 9/14/2005
Oh...the tension grows. The suspense heightens...
The only thing I would suggest is a more careful job proofreading. Other than that, great work!
| Fauna Greywolf chapter 5 . 9/14/2005
oh...my...god! little bright heart had a major blow up. heheheh kind a like his last invention.