|Reviews for Am I Cute?|
| Colocho1216 chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
Lo que hago por una buena historia (usar el traductor y unos diccionarios ingles-español) pero puedo decir que si vale la pena por historias como estas y que ademas invitan a terminarlas. muy buen trabajo, very good work, i hope to see more work on your part. Sorry if this is misspelled , the English is not my native language.
| DustyHat chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Yay! An FFTA Fic (this is the first one I've read so far though) I thought the story was good but I don't quite remember the game dialogue being like that at the end...maybe I'm just thinking too hard. Bottom Line :Awesome
| yourknightinshiningarmor chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
UGH! im disapointed in you. that story was genius! (along with humorous) You shoulda but in some lemon...
| falcon crest chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
the story needs an end...
this thing isnt even an open ending
you need a real end to it. not a closing, just something that would indicate the story is over like
ritz gasped, swore she would find an occasion for shara to regret this and asked "marche, do you think i'm c...ute?" march looked at her and gave her his answer
in that case you have an open ending.
| Dark Judgement chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Your as modest as Marche...but great story going into my favs :)
| Yuffie Shiba chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Wah! Its was very nice ;_; Poor Ritz! XD I love that part of the game too. I though you make another ending for the story but no...;_;... I wanted a happy ending ( you know what I mean XD)! Anyway I enjoyed the story a lot .
| black dragon of destruction chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
well this was a pretty good stpry just wish you would have made up and ending or something to add to the end instead of ending the same way the game did but its ur fic so who are we to question your creative decisions so in all it was a good read
| SodiumMan chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
hey...that was pretty good! i wish they would continue with more random scenes like that in ffta...would make the game more fun...lol...poor ritz...
| Radiance chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
...What the hell? What's your problem you racist reviewer? You feel proud about bashing someone who wrote a good story?
The FF community does NOT need another 'LOD' crappy flame war ok [see Hazard13 and Hoboslayer]? I would very much like to presume you're just an ignorant piece of trash who has no social life making idiotic flames.
You're forty years too early little boy. Go fight someone your own size.
| Flying Muslim Man chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
OMG...OMG my eyes my fuckin eyes this nigger is the worst piece of blacko to ome out of your country since Michael Jackson. you are not fit to wash my dity turban. You will be my suicide bombing practice target when i go to heaven, and Allah gives me my unlimited Virgins...
| Wings chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
| Mirian chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
OMG. SO KYUT! What're you saying, this isn't crap! It's lovely! And pretty! And *rants on every compliment*
Love this, simply love.
| ViktorMayrin chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
You know, just because you bash yourself over a "bad idea", doesn't mean that you have guts or anything. It means you lack confidence. It was cute, funny, and in-character for our lovely White-Haired Fencer, so keep at it and contiue. You will go far!
| Barry chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Nice. I like how you described the fairy boots' abilites. And Ritz's tomboy-ness shows well here. It ended a bit abruptly but it's open-ended so we can all make guesses whether she'll ask or not ;)
| Ayumi chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
Au contrair D: A 2-chapter story would ruin the oneshot open-ended feel. But it's her, I think, story so she gets to decide it I guess xD
Ritz confessing, I can't imagine it well o.o