|Reviews for Smoke Signals|
| Maidengirl chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
I was definetly not expecting that at the end but it was a good fics though.
| Lems chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
short but well... i was expecting a multichapter TwT... INO:NEJI fics are just so rare -_-'
| Trenchcoatgirl-Kyo chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
A little short, but I like it. Good job. And tsk tsk, Ino. Smoking stains your teeth.
| mewling chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Amazing. All of it. "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick." Succint.
| kosumi chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
OH NO! I wonder if she knows... i wonder if Neji will save her. Aw... hahaha. But i liked this. Its funny though. Why would Neji be hanging around her shop in the first place though? You should write more into that. Because i would so read it! :)
| Phox VS Frawg chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
O.o ino...smoking... srry cant picture it. or the pairing... but on the bright-side i think you pretty much kept them in character. "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick." i like that line. T.T poor ino's gonna die...
| Small Tuesday chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
...InoNeji? Interesting choice of pairing. Although Neji is not the type to couple with the loud, rambunctious Ino, this fiction was pretty slight. I have to say that your writing style is pleasant though. Good job, but I have to say that the pairing is not ideal.
| Klayter McCabe chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
...Your ficcage has a tendency to break my heart, but only in the gentlest way possible.
| deathrosekitty chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
(claps hands) sad, but I loved it! I hope you write more!
| Sintari chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Well, the kicker line - "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick" - cut right through ME! All through the piece I was wondering what Neji's bad habit was, but I guess now we know. Such powers aren't always a gift, are they? This was extremely well done!