Reviews for Unwanted Changes
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
A great story. I liked the part where Ray was complaining about Stetler.
Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Pity Stetler...briefly. *heh* Very nice family bonding.
Tulip Star chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Awesome! I'm working on a fishing trip fic myself at the moment (it'll be completely different from yours) but I think yours is better...
Shining Zephyr chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
This was amazingly well-written, and I love anything with Stelter bashed into the head with words. This was taken so nicely. I enjoyed this piece of work!

Lerrinus chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Nice! Horatio is always good with kids, especially with Ray Jr.

Keep up the good work! :-)
Rosmarinus chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I think this is great! That fishing trip must have been a good expereince for them and certainly one they both needed.

I'm going to make a suggestion, because this is a very good idea and setting: do some online research into fishing spots near Miami (Biscayne National Park is a natural chocie) and add some more scene description and elborate a bit more on their conversasion. Show us some more of what was happening. Also, your last paragraph is a nice summary. Open it up and continue that line of thought.

I like Ray-Jay and I like that you've given us a glimspe into his thoughts! Very nice
Sarcastic Realist chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Aw... c'mon, more please? This is good!