|Reviews for Stay With Us|
| Digidestined Ninja of Sunshine chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
| Besan chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
| Yuu Kleiyu chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
I have a question! you'll continue this fic? I realy want it! see ya!
| Crystaline-Crimson chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Like it? I freaking loved it. XD
It's amazing how many fantastic writers there are on
I'd give you more than two thumbs up, but I only have two thumbs...
| Ruthie chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I loved it! Hatsuharu is h-h-hott!
I wish I could write about suicide on my message boards... but no...
Anyways, I love your FanFics. You've got an awesome imagination!
You're an inspiration and I love that!
Now, I must run. Arigato!
| WhiteMageRyou chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
meh, it was okay ... I like sad ends though so maybe thats why I just didn't love it. It was good though :D
| Mitsuki Ashya chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
That was an awesome story! Though, there were some lines that didn't really flow with the story, overall it was great. You seem to have a good grasp on the personalities of the different characters, especially Yuki's. There was only one part that didn't really sound like Yuki, and that was when he catches up with Haru on the cliff. "'Don't be an idiot, Haru,' Yuki snapped. 'You can't kill yourself.'" didn't really sound like something Yuki would say, especially when faced with a suicidal Haru. I mean, it was Kyo telling Haru what to do and calling him an "idiot cow" that made him snap in the first place. But, as I said before, it was a great story overall.
- Mitsuki Ashya
| Anomi chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
That was friggin awsome like really I say that alot but I realy meen it
| Exotic Iris chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
nice fic...i liked it although i don't know fruits basket that much...i know it's been a long time since i last reviewed one of ur works...anyway...job well done!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ZEN!:)
| Rosemarykiss chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
Nice, this is quite good. It's nice to see Yuki helping Haru, instead of the other way around;P
| sanka chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
your fic was written decently, though I felt it could have used a lot more description and clarity. For me, it felt like a rough draft, and I would recommend smoothing out the rough edges. As far as the concept, I thought it was very insightful. I had never really given much thought to how Haru would react if he did something truly terrible in his black personality, and for that, I give you props. Although, I had one problem with your story line, and that is how everyone handled Haru's suicidal thoughts. When Yuki finally caught up with him, I was surprised that he would criticize Haru, instead of building him up. “What are you thinking?” “Are you an idiot?” Those questions should definitely be avoided when you’re dealing with a suicidal person. Haru was obviously in a lot of pain, and I wished you didn’t have the other characters take him so lightly.
| MoroTheWolfGod chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
That's going to be a sad dinner if Shigure's cooking...
| Shimmering tear chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
WOW! That was some serious drama Zen! Way to go. I just simply love your descriptive style; it's awesome! Bring on more of these will ya?
| Adelaide MacGregor chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
You seemed to get the characters down fairly well, I didn't see anything that was really out of character for any of them. Tohru usually ends up getting really...flustered when no ones feeling well, especially Yuki or Kyo. Other than that I didn't see much occ. The idea was well done as well. Very creative. We all think, Is Haru you gonna snap? But he never does, and you didn't a pretty good job, I think with what he would think in this situation. I assume (...which could be bad I suppose) that this was a one-shot. I usually don't like them, because the author doesn't develope the story well enough, but you did a really good job with. Good luck with future FB stories, if you need help let me know! My friends and I are FB experts!