|Reviews for Free me|
| Anchorite chapter 2 . 7/1/2008
Lovely, languid yet swift, with a touch of sadness akin to a late autumn morning. Keep writing!
| Anchorite chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Dramatic mood does suit you!
Looking forward to more.
Love the lyricism.
| orientalbunny chapter 2 . 6/14/2006
A very elegant oneshot. I was very moved by the lines:
"He inclines his head slowly, the onlybow he’ll ever make, as he quietly accepts."
Regal, sad, and lovely. Thank you.
| FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
..and they lived happily ever after.
| tea rose dreams chapter 2 . 4/11/2006
oh, how terribly sad... i like the way you wrote it, the style fitted the storyline very well... actually, i'll ammend my first statement - it's sad, but not entirely... oh,i suck at explaining myself! anyway, i'll stop babbling now... *grin*
| 009900990099 chapter 2 . 2/19/2006
That was really sweet...
| SnowGirl7 chapter 2 . 2/14/2006
Aw, I love this one too! This is going in my favorites.
| SnowGirl7 chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
You are really talented! I loved it.
| Silvermasque chapter 2 . 2/10/2006
| Robyn Maddison chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
M. Very poignant. Perhaps what I enjoyed most about this oneshot is that you seem to capture the melancholy that growing up and leaving some part of us behind can bring. Okay, 'nuff said. good work.
| QueenOfHearts3 chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
wow *blinks* thats well-written _ very impressive! i particularly liked that line, "It wasn't real, but was reality enough?" :D so deep! dont usually get those kinda thoughts in a one-shot hehe perfect way to end it too, tho as the Empress in "Anastasia" says... "No. It's a perfect beginning." _ heehee youre right, this is quite surreal... too cool!
| Kadasa-Mori chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
This is wonderful! I love it! You ended it perfectly! Anymore and it probably would've ruined the story! Awesome job!
| EmmyAngel chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Nice. Very well-written. It's almost poetic. I'd say "write more," but doing so might ruin it.
| Taryn Knight chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
I was enthralled to the last word, and I must admit, while I would love for there to be more, I think this story is perfect the way it is. The finality of it without really having a definate ending it was perfectly orchestrated. It could go on, but the real question is- does it need to?
I think you managed to make your point in a few hundred words which, from personal experience, is generally hard to accomplish.
However, if you did write more, I certainly wouldn't complain. Keep up the excellent writing!
| Laura135 chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Wow, this was something really different from you and I really enjoyed it. It gave me shivers just reading it and was really inspiring.