|Reviews for Holding His Gaze|
| SerasianWind chapter 1 . 11/1
Wow... This actually made me cry. Beautiful.
Your writing is very powerful - thank you for sharing.
| JustAnotherDCfan chapter 1 . 1/24
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
I hate you for making love a fanfic where my favourite pairing is so sad...
Go die you Black Organisation.
| GraMyr chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
This is so so sad, I really was crying, especially towards the end when they were reunited! Wonderful story! My poor babies ;_;
| passwordrawr chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Death to the Organization - I hate you all.
| DetectiveLion chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Awwww! I nearly cried at the end. Why do your stories always make me feel happy and sad at the exact same time? It's confusing!
On one hand, I feel horrible for Heiji and Kazuha who had to wait so long to be together.
On the other, Kazuha DID wait for him, and now they're together. And #$%, I feel like crying and smiling right now. Again. You're really good at inciting emotions with your writing. Keep it up.
| tantei no hime chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Woman. I am drowning in my own tears this minute! And it's all because of YOU! I DON'T USUALLY CRY, YOU KNOW!
| 0XxPartingCloudsxX0 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
I absolutely loved your Fanfiction!
Though it makes me feel bad, I actually enjoyed reading the depressing angsty-ness of this story.
Your writing is really good. I was sort of scared that your writing was horrible and that you'd entirely butcher Heiji's death, but you soon proved me wrong. Good work!
| Mysteryfan17 chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
I think Gin enjoys killing too much to wait. I had to be someone else to want Heiji to turn around or close his eyes. Gin seems like the kind a guy that would prefer to watch the death. I sound sick don't I? I think the end was sweet, kinda reminded me of the end of Titanic when Rose reunited with Jack...or did you do that on purpose? Well, it was a sad but sweet story, and Conan most likely tore the Black Org apart after this.
| Marimo-Chan chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
So Sad T.T
I dont imagine heiji dying
You're such a good writer u know
Um .. one question .. what does " Owari " mean ?
| topaz-tantei chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Heiji~! No~! *sob* Poor Shinichi... and Kazuha-chan too! *sniffle*
Good fic though! Even if it was sad...
| A Bibliophile chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
This was certainly not what I was expecting, but it is brilliant nonetheless. I feel sorry for Heiji, he didn't deserve to die. Still, this piece reminds us all that it's not all fun and games, as we so easily forget.
| Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
The idea of Heiji being a target since he's somehow always, one way or another, connected with Shinichi had been running through my head since the twelfth of forever.
Glad it's been put on paper (or well, internet.)
now that that's said...
*breaks down sobbing*
HEIJI! YOU DIED!
| nemo chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
This fic is amazing.
Seriously, it's truly touching...but also so damn heart-breaking. Made me cry so much too. But wow...
Your writing is just awesome. Everything fits so well, the phrasing; the wording; the storyline. I love the ending, too.
THANK YOU so much for letting us read this amazing work. 加油!
| Kittymama12 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Beautiful, I love this. It's perfect. Wow!