Reviews for Mysterious Saviors |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ong!... but i really think tat u shld mention about aya's real past more. and about Suzuno either way the story is gettin really interesting! ja-ne |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...i hab so many questions... 1. where's tooya and yuuhi? was tat star fing tat tooya had tat revived aya? 3. are they gonna be in a car crash! guess i'll find out wen i read the other chpters i havn't had much time lately... i hab so much hw, i don't get much time to read any more... o well... either way i hope u continue with the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg... not related to Aki...but Aki is hot!lolz but it was a good tun over. hm... i can't really tell whether it was as interesting as the other chapters, but keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() um...i think it's spelt 'haragamo' or something like tat...ima pretty sure. da chapter is interesting and story is getting interesting as well... u could of gone into a bit more details but, either way its really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter was really interesting...but i think u cld of made it longer or put more details into it, overall i really liked it and can't wait to read the nxt chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...freaky, lolz. aniwaiz i really like this chapter and i'll continue reading, i just havn't been havin da time to read and review at da moment :( but i'll try and read as soon as possible! keep up with da good work i really like the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know who it is! its touya! i know i'm right. i really like your story! ayashi no ceres is the best anime tat i've ever watched... and i've watched a lot! there are a few mispelled words in the story but you can esily make out the words of the story... there isn't anything else wrong with it so yeah ... so i hope u continue writin ghte story cause i look forward to reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not updating for a long time? *sigh* You've dissapointed me...and now here I thought an update will be coming soon...*sigh heavily* Lolz. I sigh to much don't I? :D ForbiddenHeartz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sup? Its me remember? :D Haven't been updating cause my com crashed for a few months! But now Im back to read and review. Anywais...back to the point of reviewing...I loved your bonus dialogue! Yuuhi is such a dork...(a good dorkish way. XD) ForbiddenHeartz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story pal! Keep up the good work! And by the way, when are you gonna show up on MSN? It's gonna drive me nuts without some1 2 talk 2...not 2 mention i'm usually gettin bored talkin 2 Ingrid's complaints...Dun tell her i said that...pls? Ok, bb |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Good story. I sure hope aya gets better. write soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! i can't wait till you put up the next chapter. i hope you upcate soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its spelt HAGOROMO, i think |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah... It's me, gunz again. Sorry about the previous review. I think I was on crazy. Anyway, update soon and please don't make Tooya leave! P.S Did you change your name? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! luv your story. i feel likewhen we were in school Stella, u and me had a better friendship then know. i feel like we have drifted far away. Sorry for the grammatical error. |