Reviews for Ill
TransformingTurtle chapter 3 . 6/23
Really good. I love Roy and Ed fluff. Thanks for writing!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/24
The Mirror Above the Sink chapter 3 . 1/29
"That's Al's fucking carrot. You leave it alone."

I loved this little three-shot! I was so glad it wasn't a yaoi story! Though at some points you forgot to add a space, but that doesn't matter much!
Kas3y chapter 3 . 8/16/2015
Great job, I didn't really care wat happened to Lust, I could see that u were focusing on Ed and Roy so I think u did an amazing job, love it, keep it up :)
Lilac Gemini chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
WOW. This is AMAZING! You'd better continue, or Ed will vomit on your face! I'm not kidding!
ZakuroU chapter 3 . 7/1/2014



I really love this! Just the originality of the plot and the wonderful dialogue (seriously - 'That's Al's f*cking carrot' - best line ever.) make this whole thing AWESSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME! !

(Excited Zakkie is excited.)

I really really like this fic! Thanks for the awesome read. (Was so excited I flipped about all over the place and tied a jacket on my head.)
JinkiesCrown chapter 3 . 6/18/2014
I couldn't help but laugh at the end...About Al's carrot. xD
ToscaThorCat chapter 3 . 11/27/2013
I can see Ed snapping at Mustang about a carrot XD This story was great!
Rowana1 chapter 3 . 9/10/2013
*squirms contentedly from the puddle of mush she's dissolved into upon reading this perfect fanfic*
CinqLuna chapter 3 . 5/16/2013
whao.. what a nice one. I truly love it. :'3
Firefly264 chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
Aww! This ending is so cute, especially the bit about 'Al's carrot'. I can totally see that, it's adorable!
Victorious-Mind chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
This is so sweet! I LOVED IT!
Torchbug chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
This is adorable! I agree that the things Lust was telling Roy about Ed were rather insightful. You don't really see that guilt show up in the last half of Brotherhood. The buying a meal for Al part was heartbreaking and so was how Edward throws aside the respect he gained for Roy in an instant when Roy touched Al's food. I just can't get over that. But Ed thanking Roy? CUTE.
Radon65 chapter 3 . 3/20/2011
I figured Lust would've just bugged out at that point, things were getting too messy, too many people, it's not that unrealistic. Plus, she probably figured there were plenty of opportunities to kill Roy later, Pride could help with any issues of Mustang reporting about her - if anybody believed him, which apparently they didn't, anyway - and they probably eventually decided that keeping him alive as a human sacrifice was worth it. I really liked your description of the diner and the waitress and such. It might be interesting to write a chapter of what happened from Ed's perspective - just how much he heard and what he thought, etc.
Radon65 chapter 2 . 3/20/2011
Well, crap. That was funny, the way Lust started helping, just interested in making sure Edward lived. All the stuff she said about Ed was interesting - she's spent so much time following him around... And I really liked Mustang's rebuttal, how she can't understand what Ed feels - that was a major issue for Lust in the Original Anime, that was a good choice for something that REALLY pushed her buttons. Their conversations, their mutual interest in Ed but for different reasons, was good. And Mustang basically going, screw this and escaping at the end was awesome. My only complaint is when Lust talked about Ed not eating and having meager portions - we've seen Ed eat, and he eats a LOT. And fast. Damn.
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