|Reviews for Punishment|
| CopyNinAstral chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I didn't cry in the beginning, though it was not for lack of surprise, though I should have expected it with the brief summary.
No, it was when God appeared, and He and Crowley began to talk...that I completely lost it.
So, now here I am crying happily at the words, because apparently I am so much more of an Aziraphale and Crowley fan than I'd ever realized before.
Thank you very, very much for sharing. I always feel you capture Crowley especially well.
| tears-of-a-different-shade chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Wow, that was incredibly beautifully written! I burst into tears at about the same point as Crowley. Honestly, that was truly brilliant piece of work.
| Sawlt to Your Suger chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Aww. Aww. Aww. *sobs a little, laughs a little, is happy all in all*
This one was like a long drabble. But still darling. Ok, last one of the night, I'll read more later! Yayy for good writing.
| Belle Bing chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
| Lily Carroll chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
Your fic made to regret me.
The torture of Aziralaphale, the feelings of Crowley, the words of God calling the serpent for the true name, they were beautiful moments. The fic is touching, sad and simply wonderfull. it is a divine work!
| Dana Norram chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
i loved your fic! *_* congratulations for this.
crowley is so cute. _ but, i prefer aziraphale anyway... p
| Pandora de Romanus chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Very good. I liked. And I want what happens next. It moved me deeply. Don't stop, please.
| DarkPhoenixBC chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
I enjoy the way your mind works. It's so rare to find what I call a "complete" fic. That is, one that stays true to the canon and characters, contains no noticeable flaws in spelling/grammar/mechanics/usage, is of decent length and makes good use of every word, and is even spacede so as to be aesthetically pleasing to boot. And as a plus, you keep your work free of excessive commenting. You are a gem among ficwriters, and I commend you.
As for this fic in particular, it is beautiful. The illustration of God is very basic and unassuming, just stereotypical enough to keep within a reader's without stretching the imaginaiton; compassionate and merciful, even gender neutral.
Crowley's sacrifice is beautiful, and he stays in character even when expressing his more tender emotions, not taking time to angst over his decision, or regret it afterwards.
What more can I say. Again, bravo.
| AppleCiderVinegar chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
I read this story once, and then was too emotionally charged (meaning bawling my eyes out) to remember to leave a review. So I came back and read it a second time (because it's just that good) before hitting the purple button. As it now stands, I cried the first time (first of sadness then of joy...or some related emotion) I read it, and now I'm crying again. I never cry the second time I read something.
Good fic. Definitely going on my favorites.
| Excelsior Skyy chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Just beautiful. There's so much more to say but beautiful does the job. *sigh*
| EreshkigalGirl chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Woah. Crying and woah.
| Mislef chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Wow. I LOVE it. *huggles story* that's so good. lovelovelove.
| Coronfrim Crelumin chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
ONE review? ONE! This is a mistake, because this is marvellous! I love it! And so sad! and so sweet. love it
| Devinedragon chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
What? Evil God! How..why...why is he doing Lucifers demands? Why can't Crowley have his wings? Hope you write a continue on this one, it's great...