Reviews for Uncontrol
Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
chloe chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I love this story, probably for its style. The way the sentences have similarities and differences make the developments both unexpected and subtle. Thank you.
lauren chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
oh my word, i was blushing like crazy. Ryou gave in to bakura. AW!
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
If yours is this good than I'm definitely going to read 'Want Me'.
sparkly red ribbon chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
wow...must...go to profile no Hikari...(is in a trance)...i loved that. that was so...sensual...if you can't tell...i like dots...
KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Yaa~~! I love it! It's so sweet how Ryou tottered back and forth between describing his obvious love for Bakura and insisting he didn't like him.

'When we finished last night' huh? Was that supposed to imply...? I think the first bit that Bakura said was a bit too cheesy, but I loved what he said he'd do to Ryou if he could have him! *squee*

'I know that he wonders how far I'd let him go before I screamed for him to stop.' Yah! There's so many sexual implications in this fic, yet it's really mild... Great work!
adele4 chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Oh! this is really good! It’s amazing how there are only four point of views, none of them very long, and yet there doesn’t seem to be anything brisk in the change. I love the tone of it, and the way it’s clear they’re so close the whole time, yet never seem to talk to each other (which is probably why I love this line "Ryou says strange things when he doesn't think I'm listening."; though, I really like all of the ending).
LilPurplFlwr chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
WOW... this has an amazing rhythm to it, and I like the switching between POVs. They work so nicely against each other, and it ends on such a good note. Just... a great piece.
Misura chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
I loved to read this; in spite of the changing povs, the story never lost any of its grace or tension, and its style was beautiful, yet simple. A delightful read, with a great last musing of Bakura's.
LynnieTHM chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
This is so AWESOME!1! XD
Lilriter chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
It confused me. When does Ryou let Bakura touch him? Oo I liked the "If I were granted three wishes" part. Sweetness. :D
Roxie Archer chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Bakura is irrisitible and he knows it. Poor Ryou just has to give in. But it's fun to watch him deny it.
Sapphire Dragons chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Very nice! *adored* The first thing I thought of when I saw the title was "OMG Gackt!" *cackles*
Phoenix Uchiha chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
that was so sweet,its tru luv!
Sim Master chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Oh, this is good. This is very good. *_* I especially love the repetition.
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