|Reviews for To Upset Luffy|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/27/2016
Zoro's loyalty is so cute
| OHair chapter 3 . 4/26/2015
What is this?! First two chapters were cliff hangers and you still didn't even finish it.
| fairyuto op fan chapter 3 . 1/15/2015
plz finsh the next chapter i cant wait!
| ryseinf chapter 3 . 4/12/2014
Keep going u bastard..lol I love it
| Robin chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
Please do more. I like it a lot and it makes it look like a robin and luffy fan fiction. I ran into a few mistakes and it was only a displacement of the letter. You should at least give a fourth chapter because the spot you left everybody on is a small Cliff Hanger.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
I love this story and I want to have it as a robinXLuffy fan fiction. I don't care about the m
| Monkey D. Luffy chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
I love how this story is doing and want you to do more. I also think that you should add something about luffy getting it from skanks and shanks getting it from the pyrate king Gold Roger. Welp, hope you do more.
| Death The Kid chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
I like where this story is going. I think I ran into a few mistakes on page 2 and 3 Also I hope you do a fourth chapter
| Carlo Tan chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
well the first 2 chapters where very intriguing.. then when i read that his straw hat was crush i laughed so hard i dont know why but its a comedy part for me this is good though, i think you should continue the 4th chapter at least give us a proper ending on the story.. lol still laughing about it.
| icerain chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
pleeaseeee make a chapter 4
| LyricoJ chapter 3 . 6/20/2013
I hate sanji. I mean his personality..huhu
| spiritgirl16 chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Hey,hey,hey no fourth chapter?:( But why, I thought you were doing pretty good, if you don't think it's turning out well then take a break and come back to it or re-write it but don't stop please I happen to like this story:)
I think it's very interesting an d in someways even believable:3
P.S-Also I don't think you made a lot of spelling or grammar mistakes(Trust me, I have some serious trouble in that department sometimes)
| DERPYMUFFIN3 chapter 3 . 1/18/2012
mmooovvveee please! I want more *holds out a muffin and an English bulldog puppy* Wanna muffin and a Puppy? I give it to you if you update * puppy looks att you with its cute little face pleading at you to take it*
| Arwenia chapter 3 . 9/22/2011
hahhaa. :D Great.! The damned hat. xD Always the hat. :D Hahaha. xD
I want the 4th part. O.O Puppy eyes.! Pleaseee.! :D :D
| JuzSomeone chapter 3 . 10/7/2010
hmm.. interesting... :X