Reviews for Star Wars, Anakin and Padme's Commentary
talerano chapter 1 . 9/3
Guest chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
When the next chapter !?
CrazyFangirl XD chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
Lol can you do Return of the Jedi?
Zzzzzz chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Do the rest
TheLogicalDreamerandWriter chapter 2 . 11/17/2010
lol awsome plez update soon thanx:)
jedimasterblueartis-saber chapter 2 . 11/6/2010
So funny, this is one of the best commentary. EVER! your,Blue a Crazy random Jedi
laces chapter 2 . 2/15/2010
loved this story!
newsiesgirllaces chapter 2 . 2/9/2010
loved the story! I'm cracking up!

Black-Cat-8102 chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
You have 2 do another chapter : ) Please?
AniLovesMe chapter 2 . 1/30/2009
AH This was SO funny! Oh my gosh please please PLEASE write the next one! Is it gonna be up soon? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE try to hurry!

AniLovesMe chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
BollywoodRocks chapter 2 . 5/6/2007
I know it's been like a year, but please update! This is really, really funny! Here are my favorite parts:

1) Leia kisses Luke.

Anakin and Padme: AH!

Anakin throws the coffee he is drinking into his eyes. He takes out his light saber to gouge them out, but Padme stops him, attempting to steal it and gouge out her own eyes. A struggle ensues, ending in the two of them lying face up on the floor, staring numbly at the ceiling. They both hyperventilate.

2) He kisses her, and they get pretty into it but 3PO comes to interrupt matters, as always.

Padme: -gasp-

Anakin: They kissed, didn’t they?

Padme: Um… no?

Anakin: (understanding) NO!

3) Leia pulls on a funny lever and hurts her hand. She sucks on it, hoping Han will get the hint. Han takes her hand and massages it, but Leia still pretends she doesn’t like him

Anakin: Padme?

Padme turns to him, concerned.

Anakin: I don’t like where this is going.

Anakin covers his eyes.

Anakin: Will you tell me when it’s over?

Padme: Yes sweetie, it’s ok I’m here.

Anakin pouts and she pats him on the head.
QueenNaberrie chapter 2 . 12/30/2006
I see that you haven't updated in over a year. I hope you are going to do Episode 6. This is great! LOL! Anakin is just so clueless. I think Padme has caught on to Vader really being Anakin, though.

Please update this soon.

QN :)
Brokenkey chapter 1 . 12/26/2006

update...this is really funny
ldytro chapter 1 . 12/21/2006

This is hilarious, please, please update. This is one of the best I've read!
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