Reviews for Cheese
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
I love this story & I wouldn't be surprised if this did happen.
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
That was hilarious, I loved it. great job and make another
Isuzu chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Shigure's eating it too.

Like I said, it's not my fault all the brainless brats are gullible...
osaka-chan4 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
*pfft* I can see Shigure doing something like that...
Pokegirl11 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Hahaha! This reminds me of something that happened when I was little. I convinced my brother(2 years younger than me) and my sister(5 years younger) that if you put a cat's toenail in your jewelry box, you'd get three wishes. Gross, huh? I half believed it myself. Little kids are SO gullible! Anyway, great fic! :P
WhimsicalShmoo chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Wonderful job! Lol...absolutely hilarious. My favorite part was most definitely the ending. Great job!
tsuhiyo chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
*LOLOL*! That mede me laugh! _ *maybe I should try dirt too!*...-_-; NO way...
HanaTohruShipperMorgan chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Sort of funny, but you used fangirl Japanese and that killed any trace of enjoyment I might have taken from this.

Don't. Use. Japanese. In. Fanfiction.


That's the only advice I can give you for this. Without the fangirl Japanese, it might have been pretty good.

Have a nice day!

~ Hana
Adi88 chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Again, funy. Even better. Even less likely, which is my problem with comedy, but still. "Shigure's eating it too."
vinbunny chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
*chokes on spit* shigure fell for it? damn, im tempted to tell some kid that dirt is actually cheese.
starry night blue chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
LOL! That was pretty funny! Stupid Shigure...hehe...
See Them Llamas Run chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
*snicker* Ah, the joys of being an older sibling. _
waterlily chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
it made me laugh, but even harder at the end! shigure-san, u dope!

'maybe they think its cheese...' ha! love that line!

go you! i love your work!
Oswald-radXcore chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
mwahahaha! It rocks!
littlefiction chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
yes, yes it is. and my little sister is asking why I'm giggling like that.
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